LOL@COLOMBO CATCHIN' IT FOR SNAPPIN'. LOOK MAN, I'M NOT gONNA COME ON HERE AND ACT LIKE AN ASS AND DEgRADE SHIT. I'M ONLY gONNA SPEAK ON THE WORK ITSELF.
FOR STARTERS,
YOUR TEXT LOOKS AMATEURISH(BUT YOU PROBABLY KNOW THAT). MAYBE LESS EFFECT, MAKE IT LOOK MORE SUBTLE. THE TOP FONTS ARE gETTIN' CHOPPED OFF(LOWER THEM).
ON THE PHOTO ITSELF, I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU LEFT ALL KIND OF SHIT IN THE BAKgROUND TO TAKE AWAY FROM YOUR SUBJECT. I WOULD CROP OUT THEM TWO FOO'S ON THE SHIPPIN' AND RECEIVIN' DOK OR BLUR THEY ASSES. AND I WOULDN'T WANT TO PROMOTE ALDANA'S CARPET OR THEY NUMBER(SO THAT WOULD EITHA BE BLURRED, SMUDgED, CLONED, CROPPED OR SOMETHIN' TO TAKE IT OFF AND NOT LEgIBLE. THE PICTURE ITSELF OF THE SUBJECT WOULD BE CUT OUT AND DUPLICATED AND I WOULD ENLARgE IT AND ADD WHATEVA EFFECT. BUT I WOULD KEY IN ON THE SUBJECT AND ENLARgE IT AND MAKE THAT THE FOCUS. THE BAKgROUND KIND OF TAKES FROM IT CAUSE OF WHAT'S HAPPENIN' IN THE BAK. SO ENLARgE YOUR PICTURE.
THE EFFECT OF gREEN LOOKS ALRIgHT BUT AIN'T NOTHIN' MATCHIN' OR COMPLIMENTIN' IT. I WOULD USE IT LESS AND COMPRESS THE FLYER.