Just gettin started bare w/ me...

[King Spadez]

Tangaray be my name and the shit I drank/ Spittin that heat and takin that shit to tha bank/ Fuck what u thank/Nigga i feel the west is mine/ I stay on tha grind/Got these niggaz fearin me like 99/and I'm Y2k/ Yall industry niggaz is gay/These faggot ass cats don't want it wit RaY/ becuz I'm gonna have this game on lock/and these Hoes on my jock/ Gonna need the jaws of life to get em off my cock/ Yall niggaz can't knock/ my hustle or my mutha fuckin game/ It's a damn shame/ mutha fuckaz ridin industry dick but them niggaz is lame/

and thats all yall get right now.... Tell me what u think. Honest opinions. I can only get better. *one*

 

[Ironic Commando]

it was coo fir someone who just started...but really..it was better than what i've seen on this board as of late

"/and these Hoes on my jock/ Gonna need the jaws of life to get em off my cock"

that was good line

 

[youngthug76]

hell yeah ride for the city.
niggas wonder why these niggas in dago could truly rap/
because we experienced with bustin straps/
clutchin close to 44s as we puttin diego on the map/
sesd!

 

[savdout916]

when i come back like throwbacks/ tryin to get these niggas off me like dope sacks/ they lovin ya boy and ya know dat/ ---Savdout916

thats some coo shit for a first if it was your first time

 

[savdout916]

i rate ya a 1-10 a 7