Its Whateva

[Gordon Gekko]

This is a verse from a song I got called "Its Whateva"

Real talk, Im bout tired of these dudes
a fuckin nicotine patch couldnt even keep me from smokin these fools/
Its to the point where I just dont care
u run up wrong Ima leave ya head leakin like u washin ya hair/
Im quick to raise hell as u can tell
I'll leave yo block lookin like a beach when I finish emptying shells/
Beefin with me is when u meet ya fate
cus I'll tear u out the frame like a picture of somebody I hate/
These boys is like the radio thats why they get they heads blown
cus every 5 minutes they singin a different song/
Where Im from living by the G-Code, thats a must
if u dont then u might get ya fuckin head bust/
I bring terror but they know it aint no killin me
so instead they murdered the doctors that delivered me/
Step to me and I'll shank ya
the MFG on my girbauds mean mothafuckin gangsta/
Money u dont stack it, iron u dont pack it
the only hood that u ever saw was on a jacket/
Chances, u got one more, I let my gun blow
get wrong and Ima leave yo family mourning like Alonzo/
At the door u betta check it
cus my hood is like the paint, come thru with that bullshit and get rejected/
Literally I was born in the street
the cracks in the concrete opened up and gave birth to me/

 

[BETO916]

hahaha....good shit Fam.

These boys is like the radio thats why they get they heads blown
cus every 5 minutes they singin a different song/
Where Im from living by the G-Code, thats a must
if u dont then u might get ya fuckin head bust/
I bring terror but they know it aint no killin me
so instead they murdered the doctors that delivered me/
Step to me and I'll shank ya
the MFG on my girbauds mean mothafuckin gangsta/
Money u dont stack it, iron u dont pack it
the only hood that u ever saw was on a jacket/

my favorite part.....keep doin' your thing mane. you have any audio??

 

[Gordon Gekko]

hahaha....good shit Fam.



my favorite part.....keep doin' your thing mane. you have any audio??

I used to have it on myspace but I closed that page.

 

[BETO916]

all goodie mane.....can you email me a sample of your graphic art? do you do covers and shit?? I'm always lookin' for different styles....hit me.

[email protected]

 

[southsacsav916]

THAT SHITS TIGHT AS FUCK

 

[Y-S]

yeah coo, I'd help ya out on some lines if we were workin

 

[DankedOut707]

get wrong and Ima leave yo family mourning like Alonzo/

DID U STEAL THAT LINE FROM COOLIO DA UNDADOGG?


"THE UNDADOGG AND GONZOE, HAVE YOUR FAMILY MOURNING LIKE ALONZO"

 

[rcstrss]

This is a verse from a song I got called "Its Whateva"

Real talk, Im bout tired of these dudes
a fuckin nicotine patch couldnt even keep me from smokin these fools/

that first line is hot

 

[Gordon Gekko]

DID U STEAL THAT LINE FROM COOLIO DA UNDADOGG?


"THE UNDADOGG AND GONZOE, HAVE YOUR FAMILY MOURNING LIKE ALONZO"

I never heard nobody use that line before. But if he said it too, then Im sure me and him arent the only people who's used that line.

 

[Defy]

mourning like alonzo has been said a bunch of times, don't really trip....my only concern is how did you bust this? cuz your patterning the song with like a short first line, then a long ass second line, then short, then long, etc....

I do like your some of your punchlines, but I think you should work on compound rhymes

 

[Gordon Gekko]

mourning like alonzo has been said a bunch of times, don't really trip....my only concern is how did you bust this? cuz your patterning the song with like a short first line, then a long ass second line, then short, then long, etc....

I do like your some of your punchlines, but I think you should work on compound rhymes

Its hard to explain. You'll have to hear the beat to understand how its delivered.

 

[Ri0t0uZ]

this shit is tight as fuck.....my shits similar in the structure...harder to appreciate as just text......

"Im quick to raise hell as u can tell
I'll leave yo block lookin like a beach when I finish emptying shells/"

^^that shit is fire...keep it up