It aint nothin but some shit I wrote...

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Meta4iCAL

Meta4iCAL

Raider Nation
#1
Feb 21, 2005
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Some shit I wrote for another site a lil while ago

I'm bout to be buyin-a-sack-of-pot - So I can get high-like-an-astronaut/
You're about to die-when-I-blast-a-shot - So better hide-when-I-pass-ya-block/
I'm firin-massive-shots - Whether you ask-or-not - Yall bitch-made-when-you-flow/
So catch a switch-blade-in-ya-throat - Or else you'll get hit-straight-in-ya-dome/
Just get that spliff-blazed-and-I'll-choke - And explain why I spit-flames-from-the-throat/
I'll have a stitch-lacin-ya-dome - When I'm puttin ya bitch-face-to-the-chrome/
Yall kids-stay-in-ya-home - Cause like vegans - Yall afraid-to-deal-with-the-beef/
Meta's made-to-kill-you-with-ease - While I remain-so-ill-in-the-street/
A dangerous-villain-who-speaks - My words are amazin-you-children-get-beat/
Yall fakin-aint-Willin-to-see - That Q/Q's been blazin-and-killin-TD/
I stay-just-chillin-with-leaves - When I be hittin-that-herb-in-a-blunt/
I'm stickin-you-nerds-in-the-gut - Only thing yall shittin-is-terds-in-ya-butt/
When you spit-is-you-nervous-or-what - Cause I'm just lifted-and-pervin-and-drunk/
My sickenin-words-are-the-stuff - And they just hittin-and-cursin-ya-luck/
Like some bitches-just-learnin-to-fuck - I bet you pussies-aint-ready-for-this/
Yall shook-and-just-headed-for-dick - While Ima be pushin-my-led-to-ya-clit/
Yall lookin-at-veteran-shit - I drug addict - I'm hooked-on-the-medicine-bitch/
I'll be cookin-some-menacin-shit - And if you push-I'm-expected-to-rip/
Yall shook-when-I'm-checkin-you-kids - Like fertalizer - My shit-is-just-helpin-you-out/
Check ya girl - My dick-is-it-left-in-her-mouth - Cause you gay - The chick-is-just-better-without/
Rippin-invested-in-doubt - I aint ill? - I'm just spittin-a-lesson-for-now/
Yall wish-yall-aint-mentioned-me-clowns - Dealin with me - My dissin-aint-lettin-ya-down/

just fuckin with multies here
 
B

BaYzHe||!PoW!||

Sicc OG
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Jun 9, 2002
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fiyastarta said:
thats was st8 tight,like a story

but um whats multies?
Click to expand...

like a story??? that was a battle rhyme...


and multies... are multisyllabic rhymes...


when you rhyme more than one word everytime you rhyme...


this shit was aight... nothing too spectacular... this flowed very well... put together pretty well... but the content was the only thing a bit lacking... no bars that made me just be like... damn, that was hot... but very consistent... like you said... just fucking with some multies...



and fiyastarter... shut up... you suck... you just think im rude cuz im not afraid to tell you that you are an idiot...
 
IntenseFear

IntenseFear

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Feb 28, 2005
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I'm out-for-the-paper.. clownin-you-fakers with thousands-of-straight-verbs
Hit towns-with-the-capers try to stop-me I drop-heat and put rounds-in-ya-craters
Drop down-in-the-vapors.. as I smoke the heat-is-on like Cheech-and-Chong
Come meet-the-Don as I keep-the-song like my dick cuz my piece-is-long
I'm a maniac so stay-in-back before I blaze-ya-ass like bacon-slabs
This place-is-whack I hate-the-fact you fakes-can-rap.. bitch face-the-facts
Your shit-is-weak.. I'll hit-a-geek while off so much liquor I can piss-a-creek
Stick-wit-me as I pick-the-seeds to hit-the-weed that's bout to be liftin-me
Bitch-you'll-see how a nigga delivers forearm shivers to the back-and-liver
Crack fags with masks-in-winter.. spit massive-splinters as the bullet out the plastic-enters
Now fuck-a-bitch but don't fuck-wit-dis cuz the funk-will-hit you punks-wit-grips
You like Micheal touchin-kids get busted-lips if your dome remains after a hundred-clips
Rap-is-nothin I bust gats-while-runnin to spit the pimp shit the macks-is-bumpin
click clack-I'm-dumpin nigga if you aint know you best be askin-someone

Multi's aint shit.
 
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BIG CHORIZO

Sicc OG
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Jun 16, 2002
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Damn IntenseFear comin with some serious shit. You should use that style more often carnal you come hard with it.

Meta4iCAL's shit was coo too, but it seemed like he just threw a bunch of multi's in there to have more rhymes. Some shit had nothing to do with anything, but the rhyming itself was coo.

Let me give it a try...

Big-Chorizo, hit-the-weed-slow as I cram my dick in a bitch's-meat-hole
The shit I kick-is-lethal like when I grab the mack & my pistols-beat-hoes
Got your chick-in-fetal, the position-that-is as I kick back grippin-her-tits
Listen-to-this I'm pimpin-&-shit got your bitch lickin-my-dick now I'm stickin-the-clit

Fuck it I'm tired. Shit's not my style though.
 
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