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Aug 2, 2002
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Check out this song I wrote and give me you opinion

~The cataclysmic lyric gifted untamed animalstic
~Prolific to rip shyt with sadistic linguistics
~For instance take a room full of hot emcees
~And my prophecies will give em all lobotomies
~My styles ubiquitous ridiculous ambiguous
~And strenuous I write rigorous continous
~I’m tryin to live it up vigorous If I must die soon then I’ll live as dust filled with lust
~Still I bust hella melodical splittin follicles
~The words I write so dope I call em chronicles
~The lyrical lord swinging my spiritual sword
~In the womb writin rhymes on the umbilical cord
~Under goin diagnostics see thru you with fiber optics
~Try to stop fits makin you microscopic
~I practice prophecies unlike the prophets
~That rhyme for profits from hand to clip with the force that a Glock spits
~Anti social complexities physicians dissectin these
~Ghetto syntaxes I have no lyrical equities
~Lyrically I’m the sickest to ill to front
~The realest emcee I can give whatever you want

[chorus]
Whatever you want
However you want
Whenever you want it
Pass the mic and lets run it

~I can bend words like an abdominal stretch with phenomenal text that’ll rip ya lungs outta ya chest
~Song chiropractor words therapeutic concluded
~The undisputed purest while others’ styles are diluted
~Spittin wicketness like bustin rifles at revivals
~Bigger than a fo five lyrically I’m a five fo
~My survival inherited from the tribal
~Trifle rhyme pro make niggaz stutter like Joe
~I know nigz in the game who will die fo
~This rap life so what mc’s gotta lie fo
~Screamin hardcore but they really actors
~Treat niggaz like math and reduce em in factors
~Emcee subtractor words imprinted on scrolls
~I call killin weak rappers population control
~It’s a million emcees, 6 million ways to die
~That’s six deaths for every emcee that challenges I
~My voicebox is a torch I incinerate lyrics
~Fire breathin vocals seperatin bodies from spirits
~Lyrically I’m the sickest to ill to front
~The realest emcee I can give whatever you want

{chorus}
Whatever you want
However you want
Whenever you want it
Pass the mic and lets run it

~Multi syllables leave individuals looking pitiful
~Based on empirical lyricals turned spherical
~Enter through ventricles divide spiritual & physical with chemicals that need little use to leave you invisible
~Being invincible’s the principle non-divisible
~I introduce critical ridicule in intervals
~Energy kinetic inherited genetics
~Flip hard like calisthestics embedded with prosthetics
~The prophetic sick with rhymes like diabetics
~Magnetic vocal shield producing verbal anesthetics
~I drop an atrocious dosage of vocal explosive’s
~Bend words like scoliosis to a state of comatoses
~Colloquially ferocious my intellect diagnoses
~Emcees couldn’t beat me rappin with four closed fists
~The closest emcee alive to Moses
~I part unproven emcees with verbal four fifths
~Lyrically I’m the sickest to ill to front
~The realest emcee I can give whatever you want
{chorus}


~My brain is the pulpit of a lyric apocalypse
~With verses harder than Mormon’s stayin monogamous
~My hypothesis could dissect a whole metropolis
~Weapon fundamentalist like a Glockologist
~Molesting the alphabet call it verbal abuse
~Toxic rhymes inhaled and vomiting is induced
~Wipe my @ss on brain tissues and leave sh*t on yo mind
~Head is full of riddles and rhymes cuz I spit all the time
~I’m inclined to injure enzymes in minimal time
~And break emcees into fractions with divisible lines
~Dialect sharpshooter pull the trigger of mind and lyrical nines split thru the middle of spines
~Twist up then construct a poetic picture
~Cerebral landlord thought evictor
~I got mixtures of lyrical liquors mixed like elixir
~The verbal victor, victims left shook like the richter ghetto life depictor
~Lyrically I’m the sickest to ill to front
~The realest emcee I can give whatever you want