Instincts (Recorded)

[KODOGG]

Aight chea.. I know i aint rappin to good but bare wit' me cha'll.. I think im improvin'.. Anyway's this track is Me + Fat J (If ya' hate him jus leave those comment's in the "@KODOGG" thread lol) Anyways drop yo' 2 cent's everyone heres the link to the "Music" part of soundclick tracks called "Instincts"

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/ykriminalmusic.htm

 

[King Dubb]

ay man, shit was decent, you gettin better i think.. just work WITH the beat not just over the top of it..

and that second cat on the end gonna bring u down.. cuz i couldnt listen to that stuff.

u improvin, this is just my .02

 

[KODOGG]

Good lookin' out bro, but that otha' cat is ma homie i gotta kick it wit' em 'n let em lay down his stuff.. He'll improve.. But man thankz fo' yo' comments.

 

[Tj Chipp]

yeh this si prolly ya best song so far. but fat j sounded skinny lol and he sounded liek he forgot all his lines. keep it up.

 

[$iccnes$ kid]

yea i kno i the burry line i think it wuz i stutered ah lil bit and there wuz another one two i think. lol i ain't skinny i wuz jus like losin mah voice r some shit yesterday.

 

[MrDontGIVEaFUCK]

Fat J, dawg u got tha voice homie, but juss write yah bars to the beat and its on and popin off



KoDogg, homie you needs to take a step back from the mic soundin liek you too close, and otherwise juss keep workin on yah lyrics


MVP the JUMPOFF Lyricist

 

[$iccnes$ kid]

jus checkin to c if we got anymore feed bak

 

[Big Teflon]

UHMM,WHY CHECK BY WRITIN' A REPLY,HOW 'BOUT YOU JUST LOOK?

?*CONFUSED*?

 

[$iccnes$ kid]

i uno shit

 

[Big Teflon]

AWWWW,GENIUS YOU ARE.

 

[TROLL]

imma tell u like it is.

u gettin better but there is still waayyyyyyyyy too much work for yall, because if u wanna be taken serious u gotta improve on many diffrent areas.

like 1. at least try to make your flow go with the beat. sounds like a speech with background music. u gotta really feel the beat your flowing too.

2nd it sounds annoying when u spit with no emotion, but try to sound coy about it.

3rd edit better. i can hear the mic being passed around and u scrambling to get to the mic in time. edit that shit out. sounds like u got cool edit pro, learn to use it better.

all in all, i couldnt stand that shit.

 

[KODOGG]

^^ Haha, thx fo the real.. and keep bumpin this up fo' whoeva' else hasnt left they 2 cents.

 

[BaYzHe||!PoW!||]

yo... who else thinks fat J sounds like Bart Simpson???



lmao




yall some clowns...





leave you with a bullet hole from my nine...





yall are funny...





rhyme about something other than nines, graveyards and body bags...






work on being ON BEAT



write TO THE BEAT



when you heaR a snare... thats where you rhyme...




have some type of FLOW...




YOU WHITE GUYS HAVE NO RHYTHM!!!!!! HAHAAHAHHAHAH





keep workin fellas... keeeep workin...

 

[KODOGG]

Erm.. Arnt you white?

 

[King Dubb]

@ BaYzHe||!PoW!|| white guys nothin, wtf r U dogg?

wanna b gangsta ass mu fucka, i bet you wouldnt even shoot bart simpson simp ass


where YO audios at bitch?

 

[BaYzHe||!PoW!||]

ummm im white too... but i have rhythm... i was just clowning on a stereotype...



and... i never said i was thug... i never said i was gangster... and i never said i was gonna shoot anyone... guns are for faggots who cant settle disputes like men... id rather kill you with my bare hands...


king dubb... back off my nuts... you want to hear audios?


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/bayzhemusic.htm



there ya go...


say what you want, i know youll prolly hate on it just cuz you want to talk shit to me... but your peers on the site already show me respect...


suck my nuts bitch... king dubb... you suck... get off of me...



kodogg... no disrespect, just being real with you man... peace and health...

 

[KODOGG]

Nah Nah i feel you.. I figured you were jus' clowinin with that white boy thing lol.. Us white boy's need 2 stick togetha' ya' feel?? lol.. But chea like i said any comments are welcomed.. 'n stay tuned fo' mo' shit.

 

[-TiM C-]

that shit was bad. thats all im gonna say.

 

[King Dubb]

LOL i dont give a fuck about clownin u sucka, i couldnt possibly care anyless than i do about your ass

ima peep your audios, check mine out

http://www.BlueNoseMusic.ez4.us

HOLLA

 

[YOUNG BREW]

THAT SHIT WAS PRETTY WACK..I MEAN..I CAN TELL BY YOUR LYRICS THAT YOU HAVE SOME ABILITY TO FORM A RHYME SCHEME..BUT YOUR EXECUTION IS PITIFUL....TAKE THIS CONSTRUCTIVELY..IF YOU REALLY LOVE THIS RAP SHIT..YOU WILL STICK TO IT..IF ITS JUST A FAD AND YOU WANT 2 BE COOL BY RECORDING TRACKS..DELETE YOUR COOL EDIT PRO FILES FROM YOUR COMP...PUT THE MIC DOWN..AND GO BACK TO SKATEBOARDING!...

IN ALL HONESTY THO..HOW CAN U BE TAKIN SERIOUSLY? TALKIN BOUT "RULES OF THE GAME" AND YOU SOUND LIEK YOUR NUT SACK HASNT EVEN DROPPED YET..LMAO..SORRY FOLKS JUST BEING BRUTALLY HONEST...BUT KEEP AT IT IF U LOVE IT..AND IMPROVE..AND MAKE ME SWALLOW MY WORDS SOME DAY!