inspired and written to (eazy and ren two hard muthafuckas) check it!

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try to drag me down and ama stay afloat/it's a skanless muthafucka tryena sink my boat/in my day i met people just like you/backstabbin ass suckas switchen crew to crew/thats why a muthafucka like me ain't tryena fuck with you/no hand to extend just mean mugs and a fuck off/it's a bitch for anybody like this to try and shake off/it's ok cause toop will manage/heal any wounds a fool "might" have damaged/live learn and grow/don't let me take it toe to toe/cause ama hit you good with sumthen i think you should know/i been doin it like this since back in the day/for a sucka ass hater frontin hard to display/could'nt fade me with any bullshit you try to say/cause you ain't comin with substance for every waking day/for all the lies you tellin and no one callin your bluff/take it from me cause toop already had enough/start sum shit and ama take it right to you/don't let these faggots ever fool you-him or another/that feeling you get when you know this dudes tryena smother/everything you say with too much hate/when you comin with facts a fake will fold and have nothing to debate/how many times do i have to break it down?/i could'nt be seen by a fool ass clown/about my shit and this dude saltin mine/while he's out there with a fake ass hustle/backstabbin like he really got muscle/no one in their corner/sweeter than a honey suckle!/yea i got sumthen you could really suck/cause i'm a hard muthafucka that don't give a fuck!!!

:devious: lol!
 
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its decent mayne.... maybe try and expand ya shit (words and vocab wise) and maybe a longer and more complex rhyme scheme... but at least you got a message in ya flows.. most cats here dont

stay wit it
 
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man i was inspired and written to the old school shit from eazy and ren (eazy duz it) whut you expect?

basicly it's my own verse to it flipped in another fashion...
 
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coo kodog you the first to actually say sumthen anything remotely good.this just me fuckin around a lil motivation can go a long way especially i have'nt wrote anything in over a year.