Imma Playa Remix (ft. Umbravo And Fatal Nyghtmare)

[ovarbmu]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/43285167c45e2c/


just thought yall might wanna hear this


its from the mixtape im working on entitled ''The Life And Rhymes Of Umbravo''....

always wanted to rap on a tech track and heres what i did wit it


first verse-fatal nyghtmare
hook-kaliko
second verse-tech n9ne and kaliko
third verse-umbravo (me)


let me know what you guys think of it....


thanx yall..pce

 

[Traviz1990]

it aint as bad as i thought, but my advice to you no one got respect for ne one else on here so id delete the thread.. jus my opinon

but good luck to you man

 

[AMERKILLA]

Man I stopd that shit as soon as i heard that 1st foo ghey!!

 

[DaStonedGangsta]

Man I stopd that shit as soon as i heard that 1st foo ghey!!

lol yep

 

[MID-WEST785]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/43285167c45e2c/


just thought yall might wanna hear this


its from the mixtape im working on entitled ''The Life And Rhymes Of Umbravo''....

always wanted to rap on a tech track and heres what i did wit it


first verse-fatal nyghtmare
hook-kaliko
second verse-tech n9ne and kaliko
third verse-umbravo (me)


let me know what you guys think of it....


thanx yall..pce

you need to sound more assertive and aggressive maybe even a lil faster wit the delivery on the track... just my opinion...

 

[D-MenTed]

Wow

Quality is the only thing that i liked but as one MC to another This wasent good my nigga shit was ok at best lyrics were Blah flow could of been better u wernt off flow but wernt riding the beat all in all i would trash this and try agian

ok that went to the first dude more or less

thrid verse wanst As bad Lyrics were better and thats about it

 

[ovarbmu]

i appreciate all the feedback....thanx yall

 

[ECF'NW]

I wasn't overly impressed with it.. I think the delivery could of been much better and I agree that it could of been spit more aggressively.. but in saying that you did make an attempt and it wasn't extremely horrible..

Thanks for sharing..

ECF'NW.

 

[ovarbmu]

no problem...thanx for the feedbakc homie...i appreciate it