I'll Bleed With U

[Camby Savelle]

Dear Christ...........

This is me, the new SMuRF in a new life...This is the shadows falling in deph of the sunlight...Its like 'I WAS NEVER MEANT TO BE HAPPY"...If it was etched in stone 'SMuRF WILL DIE SADLY"...I try to be positive, maybe let things go...Suddenly shit happens & then I don't know...Cope'n is like smoking, both overtime kill inside...I feel it laught at me choking, faces real in lies...See I strive to be just like you, some sort of a reflection...Just'a kid in a fucked up situation, hopefully I'll be perfect-when...You forgive me & I'll bleed with you...I was tuaght, In prayer that repetance will see me through...I just imagine your sorrow, THIS is what you died for...I feel it cause a fucking rag is all I survive for...To UNDERSTAND & try to be a better man, -I DO...Just the dream of one day resting in that other land with you...Picture something perfect & shes at my side with me...One day you'll come, ALL I ask is that you forgive me...


I don't like this piece much, but the paper i wrote it on got wet so I wanna have it somewhere just to have

 

[Been Drinkin]

I feel like this rap was worse the drinking 2 day old St Ides

 

[Ironic Commando]

^^
you must be william hung...cause you have no idea how crap your rhymes really are

 

[Been Drinkin]

are you still talking to me like your somebody little boy

 

[Camby Savelle]

Glad to see you make something out of your free time

 

[Ironic Commando]

are you still talking to me like your somebody little boy

and just like your rhymes...thats the best insult you could ever come up with.

 

[m.w.merlino]

i didnt think it was so bad...i mean for what it was

 

[Been Drinkin]

@Camby thanks i appreciate you noticing.
@Ironic- just stop Ironic just stop

 

[Ironic Commando]

@Camby thanks i appreciate you noticing.
@Ironic- just stop Ironic just stop

stop rappin...please stop rappin :devious:

 

[Been Drinkin]

put me in my grave boy.

 

[Ironic Commando]

sorry...i dont play that gay shit