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nlrwriting

nlrwriting

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Whats good Bay? This is ya boy Nick from NLR Writing. Right now I'm working with Ceza at Xplosive Magazine and working as a writer for siccness.net. (Check the Tech N9ne Interview on the front page). Check me out at www.myspace.com/nlrwriting

I need some feedback on my homie's slaps! He's from Oakland but lives in Grass Valley right now. He's my boy 4 life and I'm tryin to push his album this summer that Drops on july 4th.
Check him out for me and let me know what y'all think. He want's to start doin' show's in the Bay but he want's to get some feedback from the streets first.
Let me know!
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Sammy “P”
Nuttin 2 Somethin

Sammy “P” “Nuttin 2 Somethin " july 4th!

All major stores,Cd baby, Tower.com, My space, on tha streetz….
Get at him here: www.myspace.com/gametightrecordz1

 
nlrwriting

nlrwriting

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Damn...I thought y'all would have a lot to say bout this cat! Guess not! He's got collabs on here with Beeda Weeda, Snoop, JT Tha Bigga Figga, Haystack, Jon Young and more. I think it's heat but I need y'all's opinion. Please let me know!
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" He Pretty Nice "What Ever You Want" Beat Pretty Cool He Got Some Cool Bars....Emotion And Lyrics Is Pretty Cool....Hook Is Pretty Good Fast Tempo Always Hard....He Got A Old School Flavor

"SummerTime"-Beat Is That Old School Rida Flavor...Nice Hook With The Roger And ZAP SOund!!!....His Voice Need To Be Turned Up Tho...He Spit Pretty Cool...He Got a Constant Flow

He Nice I Will Get At Him For A Feature For Our Mixtape Or You Can Set It Up

He Certified

Neek
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RIP DUKE BROTHERS
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this is the wrong place to look for feedback. no one has the energy anymore to listen to people because there is so much trash circulating around these days. Anyway i went ahead and heard "summertime", lyrics are on point, delivery could use some work, i think you could put more swag into it, and i think you shouldnt do so many doubles/triples, they make the song sound to cluttered. Verse/Double/Ad Lib is enough in my opinion. Anyway, the beat is good, not all synthy like everything else today. But yea there ya go, theres my feedback, keep up the good work.
 
J:M

J:M

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I see you've been bumping this thread. So Ima lay it down.

At first, I thought it was going to be a good experience. After hearing the first 20 seconds, I say get someone new to sing the hook, or get the mastering up to par with everyone else coming out with a CD. I agree with fuckthemsquares that the delivery needs help. Honestly, it's not crap. But it sounds pretty much like everything else coming out in the bay. Nothing spectactular about it, average song at best. There's my 2 cents. Just get that mastering up is my only real comment. Keep it up though, can't hate on the hustle.
 
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nlrwriting said:
That's what I wanted to hear fam. The track's aren't mastered at all yet. Still raw...all of em'. He want's to hear critisizm too guy's. If y'all don't like it then let him know why.
Good lookin' out!
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need the good and the bad... mastered versions of the song will be up in 2 weeks... thanks guys
 
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