i guess it's my debut verse......lol

[J-Sin]

on the real, i know i'm the best here
cuz i'm so ahead of my time, i actually wrote this next year
& death's near, you'll pay the price when you test me
cuz folded jeans is the closest you'll ever get to bent-lee's
i'm deadly, & already got half this board shook
& I'll have the rest cornered & take out these poor rooks
like chess, i'll score moves just for proof that i'm the best
cuz i'm the brightest on this page like highlighted text
I want to find who's next to just rip them to pieces
cuz they'll get beat quicker than rhythms on Reason
without a wink of sleep & rest, you can't cheat this test
yall kids ain't got no manners cuz you always leave a mess
i speak & bless, against bitches with the heart to fight me
but vigilante can't suck, he already started biting
my dick's the hardest pipe dream that ya girl has thought about
& she boxes giving blows to heads, but you never got a round

quick 16 lines........ reply with a crit.... peace.

 

[Juan Million]

on the real, i know i'm the best here
cuz i'm so ahead of my time, i actually wrote this next year
& death's near, you'll pay the price when you test me
cuz folded jeans is the closest you'll ever get to bent-lee's

HAHA good shit...

You fell off after that though, keep at it playa.

 

[-TiM C-]

sounds to me like he bit that line.. cuz he started with it and the rest was weak.

 

[J-Sin]

weak? aight man..... we could battle but nowadays i battle audio.. but i'll make an exception just for you.

well, i'll tell you what tim...... go to my soundclick site and peep my audios....

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/honorone_music.htm

tell what you think aight?

later hater.

 

[All Hallowz Eve]

Nice name cuz I use to use the same one...

 

[-TiM C-]

peeped your audio, only listened to the first one cause i had real music playing when i read your post.. it was ok, the production was pretty good, flow was nice, not really anything above average. keep at it tho..

later hater? i call it how i see it, one damn good line and the rest not even good.. hmmmm..

not to mention it says reply with crit.. theres my crit, and you get mad? shoulda put: only reply if you have something nice to say, becuase the truth is, i cant handle negativity. maybe i was just right about you biting?


have a nice day

 

[GANGSTAEIGHT]

what part of une city you from playa

since you're 21 and from u.c., i'm guessing you graduated from logan the same year i did

 

[MrDontGIVEaFUCK]

its aight homie... i hope you could do better... and if you wanted to battle tim. you need to get better folks.. he will rip you a new asshole!!!!

 

[J-Sin]

tim....

you didn't critique me.... you said i probably bit.. but anyway.. i typed something real quick and posted it... you can respond if you want.

but if we battled seriously, it can be audio over the net or face to face....

peace.

 

[Juan Million]

sounds to me like he bit that line.. cuz he started with it and the rest was weak.

Tim he's right...he asked for crit homie, don't just assume that he bit cause the rest wasn't as good as that line. It all had an even flow to it...

feel me