i dont rap, but i wrote this

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Jun 27, 2002
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i dont rap, but i wrote this *feedback appreciated*

"Talkin 2 the sidewalk"


They say wit age comes wisdom
So I always listened when them OGs was speakin,
Cause they teachings
Was gonna mold me to get the goals that Im reaching
So I had to peep game
Recognize the facts…. and keep track of names
Don’t ever forget a face, in case some shit come around from back in the days
Stay true to yo trade…
don’t make the mistake of letting em know how much you make
and ya betta have a different spot for ya business and ya personal place
Don’t shit where you lay
That’s just one of the ways to stay ahead
Im catchin myself havin conversation with the concrete again
The words of dead men on the tip of my tongue….
As I jaywalk on this highway to hell with nowhere to run ….
It’s all begun with a young niggas dream,
And a million dollar mouthpiece when it comes to workin’ a scheme
I spent my whole life trying to form me a team…
a family full a of soldiers that hustle harder than me
And ended up having to get over on niggas tryin to get over on me.
It’s a damn shame, that aint the way it should be
From smoking weed with OG’s and crackin bottles wit shotcallaz
The told me “ Be about ya money in these streets only settle for top dolla”
Know the difference between ya friends and ya potnas
Mixing business and pleasure is how you end up with drama
Ima takin this shit to the grave wit me and keep it locked in the basement
and till then all my secrets gonna between me and the pavement

" i really aint no rapper, i speak the truth though when i wrote this
this is for my niggas that grew up as a child feelin hopeless
I really aint no rapper, I just write sometimes
and spill my thoughts onto paper, it just happens to rhyme"





yeah i dont rap, i write a little, but i aint no rapper....just fuckin around, but feedback is appreciated
 
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Amazing because even though you say you ain't a rapper, you got it because you said what made sense and what felt good to you. I been writing for 4 years and I don't post here because I plan to take it further that doin the Netcee thang 'cause I ain't that and wasn't that to begin with.
 
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Lost track of who I was
I thought it was love....
Was it me or was it the drugs
Cause sometimes that's what it does
Where did she come from...where did it all go
The thin line between love n hate
Only ended up ....leading to my nose..

Once a hoe...always a hoe
At least that's what they tell ya
If you put silk on a pig, n try n teach it to sing
Its still gonna end in failure


They ran that game on pulled a train on her
Fucked her n came on her after that it was game over
The no tell motel is where it went down
But word got around
And the shit she did when she was drunk she regrettin it now
Some say she was foul some say she was scandalous man
Some smile in her face laugh behind her back n don't say a damn thang
Really its a damn shame
She claim she don't remember it

You been repeating lies
Lookin into mine wit them cheatin eyes
Where the hell you really be at night
Can't believe I didn't see the signs
It just aint right how love can leave you blind
But on the other side of what we facin
Can't be a nigga that's hatin
You chose to make the move and you made it
And I can't blame him
Cause if it was me in the situation I'd be the first to take it
My instinct was basic when I got that feelin n couldn't shake it
But know I been mistaken before...
Shoulda packed my shit and hit the door
And leave a note before I go so she knows
That
"Love don't live here anymore"


And in the end...we both lost a little faith love,

Shes ones a trick shell show you here tits if you show here some bead
Show that bitch some dick n watch her drop quick to her knees
She's runnin the streets with no lease and shes eager to please
No I.d's
Catch her in the club n she's eager to leave
After 2 drinks and you mention the weed
Go ahead and slip her some e and shell be ready to go
But she's a posterchild 4 a three letter disease
Just to let you know...
And goes to to show she's low class though even at her best
Claimin she aint a hoe, she just really like sex
A freak wit no regrets, fuckin the next nigga to hers a game
She don't complain, she there to fuck suckn cut by the next day
3 sum n gangbangs to her it all the same
And the way she look at it she just doin her thang
Different nicknames given by different niggas dat done hit
I call the bitch kitty litter cause she fulla shit
Don't get it twisted its strickly business
Aint no feelings involved
But she gonna always but she the one always down to fuck when ya call
she down for it all, and any position
Let you pick where ya wanna stick it
Double dickin
Her and her friend drunk n thizzin
Getiin into sum sexy tongue kissin n lightwgt lesbianism
And when she's pissy drunk shell fuck just about anyone she sees
Alcohol brings out the beast she aint got time 2 tease
She gets weak in the knees even when she aint on her feet
She really believe she being discreet
But her bizness all out in the street
Keepin a secret aint a thing she was ever good at
Thinkin she got the gift of gab but she really just a hoodrat
Might as well have a mattress on her back but she try n keep in on the under
Callin back from block numbers
she only fuck wit rap niggaz n drug runnerz
Got started when she was younger
Now she got a hunger
So she creeps like a spider
On the late nighter nighter and she luvs it when a nigga cums up inside her