The font needs to be worked out, it doesn't stand out enough and it's lost with the white of the graphic, the outline doesn't help much either, that glow just looks kinda corney...
This cover could be murderous piece of work so quick its not even funny...I like what you have so far and it has TONS of potential. I have a vision for it. That image on the left looks like a tree if its not make it one and possibly place it behind him...Also it looks like on the right he has some mini blinds crackin'...Do away with that....KEEP SIMPLE AND CLEAN in mind.The title font is sick but make the artist text easier to read. For some reason this cover made me think of the TV series SFU cover. Anyways keep it up