"Hunger Pains" from the new album

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Jun 27, 2002
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Hunger Pains" from the new album
fuck that, fools wanna try and act sav in front of the potnas/
startina riot aint my thang , Im tryin to bubble up potna
By my self, everyone else rollin wit a squad
Actin like broads
I keep my dirt behind walls
dodgin and duckin the law..
Charlie got charged, so now Im running shit
Ball in my hand playin keep away from sucka shit
I stay crooked like a dopefiends teeth
So watch out and add 100 to the 50 feet
We sleep eyes wide, standin up, puttin in 8
In the lake, Doin what you thought i wasnt, makin a name
And you, prolly got a sloppy thing you call a grind
Hollerin you got it, when i get at ya , ya dry
So ya say, you figure you'd have mail from all the tickets you sell
Dont brag when I aint doing to well
Aint no tellin what I will or wont do , to you
Hunger Pains got me actin cuckoo

"Charge it to the game its a loss
Muthafucka be burnin they bridges, not handlin business
fuckin over friends and gettin tossed
Its a cold Game
Dont play if you dont waana take a loos
Its a damn shame
In this cold game , feelin Hunger Pains"


Nobody know and understands the nature of man
Created with greed, deceit, and sticky hands
Where that contraband's collateral, For the capital
Investments
Drug free zones, thats known for the double sentence
Now the cops ask questions...but what the hell are they askin
Intrerrogation aint gonna help, im just sittin there laughin
And I can see that they startin to hate me....and I love it
Detained for 24 hours and released to the public
With another reason for me to hate police
Run amuck in these streets
and spit fire every time that I speak
While the weak sit gazin through the end of a barrell
thinkin this mutha fucka cold hearted like farrell's
my cold blooded ass'll fuck around and freeze in Sahara
Uh oh...spittin the truth that the shit that they scared of
You better watch it....this worlds fulla anger and hatred
They blamin me when it was money that made it
with out money ya nathin


"Charge it to the game its a loss
Muthafucka be burnin they bridges, not handlin business
fuckin over friends and gettin tossed
Its a cold Game
Dont play if you dont waana take a loos
Its a damn shame
In this cold game , feelin Hunger Pains"

copywrite 2003 Juggernaut records.
 

Jason_Haft

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Apr 23, 2003
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#3
first verse doesn't match the second verse.. like you're talking bout ya self in the first and then about the world in the second.

chorus doesn't really link them

and you should write a third verse cuz this would be a short ass song..


other than that it was aight..

you could've flipped the "hunger pains" concept a little better....


hope ya improve..

peace.
 

Jason_Haft

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Apr 23, 2003
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#5
well you said it was "hunger pains" from the new album..

i figured hunger pains was one song since you posted a chorus inbetween ya verses..

i'll peep ya music when i got some time..
 

Jason_Haft

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Apr 23, 2003
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#6
i listened to that juggernaut song on ya site..

shit was dope man..

everyone came pretty cool.. second guy rushed at the beginning but overall that's a dope ass song

props.

peace.