Honest Criticism

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Apr 25, 2002
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First Verse: Notes, Second Verse: C.O.L.A., Third Verse: Young Vicious, Fourth Verse: Crytical. This track is fucking heated as it gets, i've been bumping this shit non stop. Everyone comes tight on that, and that beat by D is knockin.
 
Apr 25, 2002
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YV and C.O.L.A. came the sickest in my opinion. I was lovin' YV's lyricals and C.O.L.A.'s sick ass delivery.....I love this cut.....
 
Apr 25, 2002
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And yeah that D-Sane slap is unbelievable. I don't understand where he comes up with these masterpiece compositions.....
 
Apr 25, 2002
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originally i couldnt decide who came tight cause im feelin this song so much....but YV's verse is very impressive and gets tighter every time i listen, so im gonna go with YV. and yes D-sane came with another astonishing beat for these artist to spit over
 
May 4, 2002
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I think Notes comes off the best
"Me im in the studio choppin tracks like a lyrical lumberjack on a scale from 1 to 10 you aint even
a 1 your 1 of that"

thats just sick sick sick sick
all though everybody come hella sick on that song I think thats the dopest line

DAK iller
 
Apr 25, 2002
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There are tons of sick ass lines/punchlines on that cut.....

"Get ya mind right, your hoes in check and your affairs in order, quit puttin' a black eye in the game, you're two faced like a trick quarter, thug of the year on the mic, soft like pillows in real life, pull your card and stamp it hoecake, you're certified...." Notes

"Compositions fuck up your senses, I prey on the weak and defenseless with verses so wack and senseless, wherever I spit it, THAT'S WHERE MURDER VISITS...." COLA

"Your phony ass CD, shoulda been a freebie" COLA

"So stay lighter on your toes than Hydrogen, and then take flight, you better read my rhymes in braille cuz you can't see me on the mic..." YV

"Yall some fakers, couldn't rip shit if all you ate was paper...." YV

ETC, ETC, ETC.....such a tight cut......
 
May 2, 2002
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Dak iller said:
I think Notes comes off the best
"Me im in the studio choppin tracks like a lyrical lumberjack on a scale from 1 to 10 you aint even
a 1 your 1 of that"

thats just sick sick sick sick
all though everybody come hella sick on that song I think thats the dopest line

DAK iller
thanks for the love fam. But it's actually "on a scale from 1 to 10, you ain't even a 1, you under that". but shit, close enough!! And everyone else, 1 luv as well....
 
Jan 13, 2003
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I feel it too

I think Mack Notes came the best, but not by much. All the verses were superheated, like a fat bitches crotch wearing corderoy pants. It aint a contest though, I think the beat was sick and the song is tight as fuck, thats whats important.
Ya digg?
 
May 2, 2002
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Damn... Im glad yall are diggin this cut so much!!!!!
It's tight that was the first time all 4 of us got down on Track...
I appreciate the feedback we get in here from yall...Its crazy to see some of yall quoting lines and shit...good shit

"Faster than the knife on the FOOD CHANNEL/
leavin fools rattled"..Crytical

thats my favorite line in the song
 
Apr 25, 2002
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"I'm from Seattle, and I'm destined to have my name up in lights, can you dig it? Me and my family finally livin' the life, so no factor rappers go practice before you step on the mic, or get that ass sent back to the lab before you finish recitin'....that's honest criticism..." Crytical

That's a sick ass line too