HOGG LIFE

[All Out HOGG]

Saggin AVIREX &'a sixteen shade'of blue COOGI, -HOGG wit'a Heckler Bannelli...Splash on the davidoff & soak my throat sipp'n some'a dat Alize & Zenfinelli...[HOGG LIFE] My nutts drag & dent the concrete...Sign'n dotted lines, I put my soul out on'a lease...Stay inhalen even when my lungs compasity is past my lungs compasity...[ANYTHING TO KEEP ME FACE 2 FACE FROM REALITY]...Just marinaten in gravity, some day you'll understand...Pretend to comprehand while i'll deal this lower hand...Singe'd wit blood i remain able to uphold my thrown...A few last breaths, [DIE'N SLOW] leave me to die alone...Digg deeper into the philosiphy, I realy need'a hug...[LIVE HOGG DIE HOGG] sending slugs to all ya nugz...but........I rather just live my HOGG LIFE wit'a HOGG WIFE...Sumthin to keep me alive & hold at night...Look to the sky, tryna gett by wishen i could gett'a diamond outa this line...Vicious, foaming at the mouth wit'a bite that won't lett go of anything thas mine...[Pitbull but civil]...Refrain my mental from being simple but im down to box ya ova'a knickle...Can't seem to cope, but always prevent myself from introduceing my neck to rope...Sitt back & smoke, lett me leave you with this as'a goodbye note..........................................

'What are you left to do when theres no longer hope?"


New style...Not too sure of...Lett me know...Good or bad...

SERIAL EXPERIMENTS SMURF

 

[DaNalej4-SHO]

IT WUZ COOL. BUT UR OTHER STYLE IS BETTER.STAY UP.4-SHO

 

[THA RIPPA]

Sign'n dotted lines, I put my soul out on'a lease...Stay inhalen even when my lungs compasity is past my lungs compasity...[ANYTHING TO KEEP ME FACE 2 FACE FROM REALITY]...Just marinaten in gravity, some day you'll understand...Pretend to comprehand while i'll deal this lower hand...Singe'd wit blood i remain able to uphold my thrown...A few last breaths, [DIE'N SLOW] leave me to die alone...Digg deeper into the philosiphy, I realy need'a hug

I rather just live my HOGG LIFE wit'a HOGG WIFE...Sumthin to keep me alive & hold at night...
Can't seem to cope, but always prevent myself from introduceing my neck to rope...

those lines really got to me.......stood out....this (and many of your other writings) remind me of the song DRAWMUHTIZED...lettin the emotions flow on it...i wish i could do this kinda shit......im workin on it.....

only thing you may wanna fix.....is the whole "saggin avarex" thing at the beginning...the rest of the verse is deep thinking...that doesnt seem to really flow with it

my grade: A-

 

[MR. LAST]

pretty good smurf.

 

[MR. TYPCEE]

IVE ALWAYZ THOUGHT YOUR TEXT WUZ TIGHT...THIZ SITUATION IZ NO DIFFERENT...JUST LIKE MY HOMIE RIPPA SPIT...GIT RIDDA THA BEGGINING...TWO DIFFERENT MOODZ...YOUR NEW STYLE???...KEEP IT THAT WAY...I COULD ONLY UNDERSTAND YOU HALF THA TIME...AND YOU GOT POWERFUL WORDZ HOMIE...IT WOULD BE A SHAME NOT TO UNDERSTAND EM...KEEP THAT SHIT UP...$IDEWAYZ

 

[Juan Million]

It started out really good, then ya lost it in the middle and then finished it off pretty good. Overall I didn't think it was as good as most of your stuff, but like I said I was still feelin how you started it out.

Saggin AVIREX &'a sixteen shade'of blue COOGI, -HOGG wit'a Heckler Bannelli...Splash on the davidoff & soak my throat sipp'n some'a dat Alize & Zenfinelli...[HOGG LIFE] My nutts drag & dent the concrete...Sign'n dotted lines, I put my soul out on'a lease...Stay inhalen even when my lungs compasity is past my lungs compasity...[ANYTHING TO KEEP ME FACE 2 FACE FROM REALITY]...Just marinaten in gravity, some day you'll understand...Pretend to comprehand while i'll deal this lower hand...

^everything past that was kinda downhill.

 

[All Out HOGG]

WOW...From the comments posted & the one's on AIM...Im getting alot of mixed reactions...Any negative feedback would help me out alot right now...

 

[All Out HOGG]

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