well actually im pretty new to all things to do with writing raps but well heres a start to a verse tell me what you guys think, gimme good and bad thoughts on this:
color me stupid, in a shade of ingenuity(spelling??)
this cleverness and wordplay is a style all new to me
usually i flip lamens terms, got bored with lame words
and invented a new style outta anger
vented through ill words, the mind swerves on each sentence
intended to hold attentions directed towards demented intentions
well i got stuck around there umm yea just hit me up with ideas and suggestions on how to go about gettin better and whatnot anywho thanks
color me stupid, in a shade of ingenuity(spelling??)
this cleverness and wordplay is a style all new to me
usually i flip lamens terms, got bored with lame words
and invented a new style outta anger
vented through ill words, the mind swerves on each sentence
intended to hold attentions directed towards demented intentions
well i got stuck around there umm yea just hit me up with ideas and suggestions on how to go about gettin better and whatnot anywho thanks