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chris capo

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Mar 17, 2003
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THIS IS JUST A LIL SOMETHIN A WROTE AT WORK DURIN BREAK IT WAS THE GRAVEYARD SHIFT SO MY MIND WASNT ALL THERE


I'LL LEAVE YA ACHIN LIKE CLAY/I'LL LEAVE YA HATIN' THE BAY/I'LL BE THE REASON THEY PUT A NEIGHBORHOOD CRIMEWATCH IN THE PLACE THAT U STAY/ STILL HERE?/ SHIT I GUESS U MADE IT TODAY/ILL HAVE U PLACED ON THE PAVEMENT OR A GUN PLACED IN YA FACE/OR PLACED ON THE BOTTOM OF ONE OF THE GREAT LAKES/YALL ANNOYIN' LIKE RAVE BASS/STRICTLY BAY/THIS IS JUST A BAY TASTE/IMA VACATE THE FAKES TO RAISE THE INCOME ON MY PAYDAY/CUZ IM HEATED LIKE DWAYNE WADE AND I BANG BANG LIKE THE UNCLE OF DAY DAY/HIP HOP LACED WIT GANGSTA SO IMAGINE MY FAN BASE/COULD U IMAGINE DAT?/ IS THERE A BLOCK IN YOUR BRAIN WAVES?/IM NORMAL NOW U SHOULDA SEEN ME IN MY INSANE DAYS/BUT I CHANGED MAYNE/ILL MAKE YOUR GIRL DISSAPPEAR LIKE DAVE BLAIN IN A CAGE/WHEN GIRLS SEE ME THEY LICK THEY FINGAZ LIKE A TEACHER BOUT TO TURN THE PAGE/U LOOK AT ME LIKE WTF BUT ITS OK PEOPLE BEEN CONCERNED FO DAYS/FUCK LEARNIN HOW TO RAP I LOOK AT IT LIKE LEARNIN TO RACE/I SPIT FIRE/YEAH/ IM BURNIN YA FACE/WE SLICK TIRES AND GET TO TURNIN DEM EIGHTS/IM NOT REPETITIVE LIKE PLAY BY PLAY OR A DRAMA KING LIKE DJ KAY SLAY/




WHAT U THINK?
 
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YOUNG BREW

Sicc OG
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Apr 25, 2002
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pretty good..u know its hard to read a delivery style...but i noticed some real good meta's and powerful punchlines..your ability to stick to one rhyme pattern thru the whole thing was nice too..heres some shit i started writin a lil earlier..to the geto boys "minds playin tricks on me" instrumental..prolly be real hard to read the delivery but believe me ive got it down..IM CALLIN IT EXPLANATIONS


I SMOKE WEED CUZ IM PEACFUL WHEN IM CHIEFIN/
THATS A GOOD REASON TO KEEP BREATHIN THE GOOD GREEN IN....-EXHALIN-/

AS I WALK DOWN TO THE NEXT TRAIL-
NEXTEL'N WIT MY HOMIE HE AN EX-FELON/

BUT....STILL LIVIN HIS LIFE LIKE A RENEGADE/
HE GAVE UP HOPE BACK IN THE DAY THAT HE WOULD EVER FIND A BETTER WAY/

BUT IM NO DIFFERENT CUZ I DO MY PORTION/
CRIMES AND SHIT OF THAT SORT IN THE PERSUIT OF MY FORTUNE/

STILL..THE THOUGHT LINGERS...SHOULD I CHOOSE CHRIST?
NEVER BEEN RELIGIOUS BUT FIGURE IM WIT IT IF IT CAN IMPROVE LIFE/

BUT ..THAN AGAIN..TEMPTATION'S SO STRONG/
I DOUBT MY LEVEL OF DEDICATION CUZ I DONE WAITED SO LONG/IM SO USED TO ALWAYS BEIN ALONE

DOIN MY OWN THANG/
ALL ABOUT WEED...ALL ABOUT DRANK-ALL ABOUT COCAINE/

A COLD SHAME BUT I GOTTA TAKE MY MEDICATION/
I GIVE A FUCK WHO DISAGREES WITH MY EXPLANATION/

THIS IS MY LIFE AND I DONT OWE U SHIT/
GOT A REAL VIOLENT TEMPER- & WOULDNT HESISTATE TO SHOW YOU IT/

SLOW DOWN..AND TRY TO UNDERSTAND MY PLIGHT/
SEE IM THE CAPTAIN OF THIS KITE AND I COMMAND MY FLIGHT/

THRU MY EYES IVE SEEN SHIT SO TWISTED/
WASTED TALENT FROM A DUDE WHO DIDNT REALIZE THAT HE WAS SO GIFTED/

BUT WHOS TO SAY IF IT WAS DESTINY?
I DONT KNOW WHATS GOOD FOR HIM SHIT I RARELY KNOW WHATS BEST FOR ME/

I TRY TO BE WHAT I THINK MY MOM EXPECTS OF ME/
AND GET DEPRESSED MAN THIS STRESS GONE BE THE DEATH OF ME/

THATS ALL I GOT BUT ITS COMIN TOGETHER NICE HOPEFGULLY I CAN HAVE IT RECORDED AND PUT UP IN THE NEAR FUTURE
 
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chris capo

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Mtown Criminal said:
pretty good..u know its hard to read a delivery style...
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yeh its funny u say that cuz i started fuckin with these keystyle groups on myspace and i lost my first 2 when i KNOW i should of won

everyone has to give a reason why they voted for who they voted and everyone said mine didnt flow good or its hard to keep track of im like wtf?

i guess i got my own delivery thats pretty original
 
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