Get Some Help!!

[RobertoxYLx]

Can a homeboy please get some help from all yall porfaz.
Here is somthing i had and just need to keep getiing feedback on it & all.
Good or bad its all good. I know i aint the greatest so dont post "well this is shit" or w/e..

http://www.zshare.net/audio/9373415706f996dc/

 

[$ileNt_eNe_ATL]

JUST LIKE THE OTHER ONES LOCO , LACKS STYLE & DELIVERY ... IT SOUNDS LIKE UR OFF BEAT AT TIMES , ... KEEP AT IT THOUGH YOU'LL GET IT ..

 

[dookie1]

Stop making shitty music....

 

[RobertoxYLx]

JUST LIKE THE OTHER ONES LOCO , LACKS STYLE & DELIVERY ... IT SOUNDS LIKE UR OFF BEAT AT TIMES , ... KEEP AT IT THOUGH YOU'LL GET IT ..

Thanx bruh, ill keep that in time next time i record..
But ay you Silent that made that 1 track con ICEE? With the Gots To Be A G' beat??

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uG0wmRYCT_w

 

[SMILEY LOCZTERO]

i like the beat you couldve done alot better control your breathing so it doesnt sound all choppy but i do see something 4 you in the future tho if you keep it at hard brotha

 

[ChangoLoco14]

Thanx bruh, ill keep that in time next time i record..
But ay you Silent that made that 1 track con ICEE? With the Gots To Be A G' beat??

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uG0wmRYCT_w

He did his own solo track with that beat.

 

[RobertoxYLx]

He did his own solo track with that beat.

Haha Yea my bad i meant "Only God Can Judge Me"