freesyle

[x-kalibur]

My rhymes arent complex but read the linez in-between the text-
Im just postin to find out my standings, Im not sure what the fuck yaw gona say bout me next-
but on the real I could give a fuck less about the critics and bullshit-
eat a dick Im gona follow gods path so I can forgive you for all your sins-
*torture* burning you with an ultra vioelnt lense-
try to commense to not talkin shit, so keep you head up-
I dont give a fuck bout yaws bullshit cause Im fed up-
foreals all your commas and quotes, Im gona use your blood to fill my moat-
Police findin your bodie with severed wrists and a slit throat-
my murder plan is perfect cops aint even seein what Im pullin-
got the heads spinnin so hard them niggas probably droolin like a kid tryna figure out a puzzle-
dont want to get into a microphone tuzzle-
Im the silent type, but while you bark I bite-
I dont half ass shit Im usin my full jaw breakin off skin and bone-
dont raise ya voice cause with this spit I split ya tone-
...............




If you dont like my shit dont post up.. 1 -out

 

[Slappin Beatz]

coo coo shit amne

 

[x-kalibur]

cmon folx give me some feedback on this bitch. -out

 

[Noxious]

I'm feelin it playa

 

[x-kalibur]

^^ thank you finally a post. good shit noxious stay up

 

[N*Sane]

tight shit homie. im feelin it...

 

[Ripgut Cannibal]

If you dont like my shit dont post up.. 1 -out

I liked it, but that's a bitch line. Constructive criticism can only make you better.:dead:

 

[Asthmatic]

Iz coo

 

[x-kalibur]

good shit Ripgut Im takin anything I can get. Constructive critcism is very appriciated. stay up -out

 

[ForsakenedSoul]

nyce X keep it comin....

 

[x-kalibur]

good shit. thanks for the feedback yall.

 

[pimpsmooth420]

IM HERE NIGGAS LISTEN

i'm living everyday but every night i'm dying/
projects keep crying for better lif i'm trying/
got me countn my ones--as the individual form/
but its like i cant keep steppn in the physical form/
mentally i got thoughts that could make this shit end/
but i living in a world where the end stops ya begin/
ask me to post freestyles but my life is written/
before a written is written its natural form is free spitten/
my thoughts travel through more paths then arabs/
back in and the lab looking for an escape path/
but i'm in da hood--guess da hood took me under/
its like i slept as a youth and as a man i need to fill this hunger/
i'm looking for the truth but it's like whos the question/
i can move two steps forward then 6 the other direction/
the way i flow got thugs probably loving da kid/
and the other half wonder if i was a victim as a kid/
my freestlyes consist of my life and the struggle/
if you aint from da hood you probably think i been posting for trouble/
its another level and its another form of lifestyle/
but for the type child my mic stlye make ya life foul/
feel me and take a walk where you fearing and lock ya doors/
red lights where you stop grab ya purse and hug the floor/
this aint the life we chose its the only choice ya'll gave/
got us here in da physical to be a fucking slave/
man i'm feeling right now--i hope you feel me right now/
cause my freestyle off da dome got niggas wonder--like how/
ya'll gotta be real cause life it artificial/
you either a victim or a suspect with da system as the official/
its nuthin