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All I got in dis lyfe is dis note book of lyricz I write /
But itz aight - I aint trippen cuz if livin getz to tight i got a clip~'n~a~hollow~tip ta' deposit in ma dome /
Tired of lookin back 'n jus seein da cops behind me - Jumpin ova' fences jus ta' flee from a J-Walkin Ticket /
The 5-O can take dat shit 'n stick it (woo) /
I aint got a place ta sleep at night - Usually cuz me 'n ma parentz in a fight /
So im usualy at ma homeboys - or kickin it on da side of a curb - listenin fo noise - of sirenz /
Ive got a gun ta ma' head - even at this moment when Im typin' /
Tryin' ta' live to da fullest /
Always got a vest strapped ta' ma' chest - 'n I got a bullet to invest in a enemie possed ta kill me /
I got nothin in ma life so im usualy prayin ta' god on one knee - Cuz datz all i got is dis plea /
Illest Emcee to hit da earth /
Fucc dat im outa da' fuccin universe /
Cursed since life - to hit da hurse befo' 25 /

[chorus]

Power to da people - Powa' ta' all /
Maul tossed ova' ma shoulder - like a fuccin neanderthal /
Shits off~the~wall /
But life getz hard sometimez - 'n ya' get throwed an oddball - or possibley a bullet /
People look at me 'n think "Jus' anotha Drug Slaingin thug" cuz who I roll~wit /
Cool~wit all da home dawgz /
Thinkin I dun know right from wrong? /
You dont even know who da fucc - I - am /
Tired of Emcees tryin ta' rap - when they jus some Eminem Biten Fan /
I got da world 'n one hand /
In da otha I got ma nine - bout ta' invest some tyme /
Life nothin but a climb 'n im tryin' not to stumble /
Earth bout ta' crumble - unda ma feet - leather coverin ma' nikes Cleet /
Box on da street 'n Im try'n ta keep it neat.. /



To all ma homiez.. Dedicated ta' ma homie *hase most of all man.. Keep it up.. Im comin down there 'n juvi ta' kick it wit you soon dawg.. Keep ya' head up bro..

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/end of verse/ -breath- ..talking.. ~stuck to gether~
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Deep song.. Sorta gangsta but steel im tryin ta keep dis shit real.. I think this betta' den the rest.. some lines suck but otha'z dope if ya ask me.. Hit me bacc wit what y'all think.. Peace.
 
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All Out HOGG

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2nd one was coo'er of the 2...but i wasn't realy feelin either that much...stay at it thou
 
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O.K. Let's see....

I aint trippen cuz if livin getz to tight i got a clip~'n~a~hollow~tip ta' deposit in ma dome /
Bullshit...

I aint got a place ta sleep at night - Usually cuz me 'n ma parentz in a fight
Now see that's COS....Not you.

Ive got a gun ta ma' head - even at this moment when Im typin' /
Damn...Handle that !

Always got a vest strapped ta' ma' chest - 'n I got a bullet to invest in a enemie possed ta kill me /
Kodogg..You the homeboy..But stop talkin' on guns...You only flipped lid's off coke bottles homie....

I got nothin in ma life so im usualy prayin ta' god on one knee - Cuz datz all i got is dis plea
Well ain't this some shit ? Cuzz...You on yo' parents Pc....You got it made nicca.....You got it provided for nicca....Don't be blind to the facts of YOUR life.

But life getz hard sometimez - 'n ya' get throwed an oddball - or possibley a bullet /
People look at me 'n think "Jus' anotha Drug Slaingin thug" cuz who I roll~wit
I'm from L.A. you from Concord...You ain't knowin' the meaning.....

Im comin down there 'n juvi ta' kick it wit you soon dawg.. Keep ya' head up bro..
Irrelivent issues....

Another thing loc....Why you typin' with two C's...You ain't Crip affiliated bro.....Miss us with that next time round.....

But the truth be told...Your other SHIT Was way worse than this...It had some good lines in there...Some shit ones (Most)...You talkin' this keep it real shit cuzzo ?...Let's retrospect that there a minute.....ARE YOU REALLY ?

Deuce LOC 1

2 C's
 
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Heh.. Deuce i love your critisism.. 'n fo' all you know I can be fuccin anyone.. but heh im jus a 14 year ol' kid in concord you got dat right.. 'n stuff bout a gun.. Yes i've handled a gun. 'n yes sometimez Iam usually kicked outa da house forced ta sleep in ma R.V or sometimez chill on da streets.. or spind da night @ ma homeboyz.. I use 2 C's cuz itz easyer then goin to a K.. 'n i was trying to point out this WAS better then most ma stuff.. 'n this aint ma parentz PC i saved up cash fo dis shit.. But thankz fo' lookin out Duece.. 'n I respect your comments EVERY time you use em.. cuz I know you dun mean any harm or anything you jus givin yo' word 'n sayin it 100% "real".. So once again Duece ill say thankz fo keepin it real homie..
 
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Keep a Level Head youngsta...
'n fo' all you know I can be fuccin anyone..
That's right...Drop the tone preppy....This ain't the site for cat's to start profilin'....You post verses every other 2 minutes...when what you should be doin' is writin' One and GRANULATE these hoes with it....

Like you said..Only violence you know is Domestic....When Daddy Tell's you to leave for a few hours to cool down after he catches you jaccin' off And you too embarassed to stay at home so you whistle some yo' potnas's to take you refuge for a night or two....


As for the hot air these other net niccas press me with....That's only good for there blow up dolls cuzzo......

I'm the reason the Hospital casualty Units stay open for service...

I'm the Reason Clubs got added security

n' btw you dont want it with duece
Real caliber speech...... :angry:

Deuce Loc 1

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Deuce I couldnt really make sense on dis post.. But I think you'r doin what so many have done to you.. Explodin on critisim.. I was jus pointin out shit you dont know.. 'n Duece I dun want it wit you.. Im sure noone does.. I dun know what your tryin to say.. But if your tryin to say that i havnt seen it?? 'n that this forum is for PRO'S??.. No.. whens the last time a proffessional rapper dropped a line on dis board.. I think it was when M-Dash dropped a line in ma thread advertisieng his CD.. 'n Why you puttin words in a brotha's mouth mayne? I aint been kicked out fo' a few hours.. bout a day a few times longer.. 'n what I said in ma post if you dont get it "I Respect your Comments" and I always have.. Keep it real homie.
 
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Deuce I couldnt really make sense on dis post..
Too bad...

But I think you'r doin what so many have done to you.. Explodin on critisim..
Naw kid...Ain't no one explodin' on Deuce...afterall why would they ?.....I don't hit em' off with too many flaws cuzz......Besides the skill level has dropped so significantly over the last year that Deuce can't even be much pressed to type verse's.....And as for pro rappers....Nicca....Nicca ain't no pro rapper's tryna battle...Ask all the OG text heads in here...Fatal,Biggz,Dvious,Smurf and the other Imperial Legends of the board....These rapper's can't drop 16 in a open flows forum cuzz...and If they do...they stupid...Imagine Lynch Droppin' 32 in here...and on the flipside of it all chargin' 3 G'z for a verse in the sicc shop....The Logic ?.....

Cuzz....A lot of people have bailed on this Board particulary over the Year in partial fact that Mothafuccer's is overcritical an' shit...Or the shit talkin' element that Goes down on a daily in here.

Bacc in the day...we had a tournament cuzz....And EVERYONE in the tournament was capable of winnin' it all....It was 32 or 16 mothafuccer's in that bitch Me Included....Now from those 16 maybe only 5 remain....So we lost 11 Only to have em' replaced by Cat's that really should never even think of Punchin' there Keyboards in this forum......

Deuce™© All Rights Reserved 2003.

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Yeah bro I feel ya' on dis post.. 'n what I meant by pro's droppin a line is.. I didnt understand your 2nd post on this thread.. I thought u meant that "The Flows Board is for pro's only" or somethin.. But i guess you didnt.. 'n Duece im jus tryin to rap - somethin i enjoy.. I aint tryin to start shit.. Aight Peece.
 
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I'm Like An Unborn Fetus On The Mic.....Ain't No touchin' this Kid


Is that ur line you made up bro?? That has to be one of the hardest hittin lines I've heard..

Put your result in a holster, attempted to draw·the·conclusion....:

Thats anotha' hittin hard line..
 
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Yea KODOGG,You the young homie Nicca,We Tryna raise you right in here....Mold you into somethin' bad....You ain't gotta be holdin' yo' ground with twin Biscuits cuzzo....Or portrayin a image for respect on this....But the Kid is finna drop some Organic Game on yo' ass...we finna turn that ass into a Modern Day Marksman cuzzzzzzzz....It's just a large percent of the board worry themselves with causes not even there own...That's why Deuce has to delegate authority on em' in the form of Overcritisism......

Improvisation cuzzo...That's what we bout'....But far as comin' on the board actin' ''the shit'' that spells the equivilent of jail with no parole cuzzo...Like that faggot MALICE.....Where he finna be in two weeks time ?......I'm fuccin' layin' the law in this bitch cuzz....Until my hands can no longer hold off the coffin lid....Til' it's over with....Ain't tryna shatter no kid's ambitions on here...But if you postin'...step cautious.....

Deuce Loc 1

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Haaa haa These Siccness Haters Kill me! Deuce who the fuck are you? lol Why dont u drop some AUDIO up in this bitch.. and show everybody how tight.. you are.. casue TEXT aint shit...! haaa haaa

Good Shit...KODOGG ! That shit was tight.. Don't Listen to this hater.. or any of these Siccness Haters.. too all yall haters on siccness FUCK YALL!
 
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Drugged out 99.....Who Am I ? That Kid that Drove the tractor that Pulled down your trailor residence....And you better know that me and My Krooked Konceptz Infantry workin' this audio shit out.....It's in motion..... So while you prancin' the siccness displayin' your gay and lesbien charms at folks...WE DOIN' IT.....So keep tonguin' ass sister....Fuccin' Girl scout .....

Deuce The VéRßåL ŧ§å§§íñ

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Man.. I apreciate EVERY time duece leaves his critisim..he jus tryin to help me.. 'n he has alot.. I owe Ho-Bustaz to ma newer shit cuz his critisim.. 'n I cant wait to hear duece lyricaly shit gon be tight.
 
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Yo Fat J checc out ma soundclick page (it's in ma sig) 'n peep ma newest shit (it has the Josh May Diss peice in there) and tell me if im improvin.. wait this dosnt jus go to fat j it goes to all y'all.. Even tho I still suck its str8.