My critique, constructive criticism etc.
For starters, your flow is rough, but most important it's a typical flow pattern in the realm of Homeboy rap. Your not sounding any different than a whole lot of other Homeboy rappers out there.
I don't mean that as a negative, simply stating that if you sharpened up your flow and featured with 2 other rappers out there, more than likely all three verses would have the same flow pattern, sound the same and you wouldn't stand out. Not a good thing.
You want to represent, by all means go for it, but musically I think you should craft your own flow pattern. Don't be afraid to be an artist, seems your too focused on representing hard, but that's irrelevant for the time being. Relax a little, step back and tells us something we haven't already heard or tell us in a different form outside the typical stand point. To where somebody could listen and realize it's actually Homeboy rap after the fourth spin. Don't follow what's already out there. Inspiration is good, but make it your own.
