feedback on me rap songs

[Ill'Mitch]

hello bart bay rappers...my name is ill mitch.....im a superstar rapper...my manager bring me to calfornia in aprial...i going to do a show........

tell me what you rappers think of my song....here,check it out:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/illmitch.htm

 

[Quick]

THE JOKE IS GETTING ALITTLE OLD NOW.

 

[net-nigg]

stop it you pink punk in cyndi lauper boots ....oh yeah shoot your manager for bringing you here ....(ill mitch is a peppermint)

 

[MURDAOUS 187]

Man you wack foo! u heard ur shit on Soundclick its wack! i dont knwo hwo you could be up on tha charts.. ur shit is wack put that mic down.. man.. you are wacker than nelly.. peace!