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LiL Nando

LiL Nando

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May 21, 2002
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FEEDBACK PORFAVOR-EVERYONE PEEP

Fuckin Buster/ ur nothin but a clocka/i should of plucked ur feathers/u pinche chavala/used me/ bically abused me/ helped promote ur wack ass shit/no need for names/cause ur lame/shitin on other rappers names/tryin to get some fame/this shit dope/like nope/tie u with rope aint no chope/hope u choke/why u tryin to act real/i knock u out like evander holified/fo real/fuckin pranksta u aint nothin and u claimin gangsta gangsta/fuckin wanksta/talk with lingo/ u aint billingual/fuck a Filipino/ill stick u with my jalapeno/life in danger/spillin all my anger/nothin on this chest/im feelin remorse/of course/i should of fucked ur bitch like a horse/ got a bulletproof vest/and u better believe ill put to the test/ill lay ur ass to rest/like biggie fa shigady/u know a hoe named zigidy?

2nd verse/ and i might need to curse/body in a herse/bodies lurk/im bizark/they say im nothin but a jerk/just cause i got smirk/fuck ur filas & addias/fuck ur clicka/i shit on u and u hear me on ur speakas/common mayn bring it/ u know ur feelin pain/this rap game is insane/u got a whole bunch of known rappin cats/on ur shit/but then ur shittin on smoov e for doin the same/its vica versa/use some glad/u aint mad is ya/ fucked u up like jay j fad/represent ur set/n o r t e that not all who rolls with me/i got the junior mafia/they from the valle/and they known for doin jales like chale up on any calles/if u see at ur next show/ dont act like a punk hoe/call me up and try to show me up/ u aint hear shit likes this/bitch blow me a kiss/now u dont want me to diss?/cause u aint seen nothin real like this open u ear/bitch dont cry a tear

u hate flakes/then u must hate urself/album didnt go no airplay/used to be small/now u paray/smokin nothin but that bammer hay/oh nay/u know u use oil of olay/

 
LiL Nando

LiL Nando

Sicc OG
#2
May 21, 2002
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FUCK BITCHES ALL U DO IS LOOK AT THE THREAD AND DONT WRITE SHIT...WELL FUCK U....I WANT FEED BACK NOT FOR SOME BITCHES JUST 2 LOOK AT IT AND NOT SAY N E THING...HOT DAMN DIDNT U READ THE THREAD?
 
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mr2productionz

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^^^^^^^i think it just rhymed....i dunno. amd you said no need for names...lol. the last word in the first verse only says ZIGIDY...haha. ayo but how far are you from stockton? we can record some shit out here...just transportation is a problem for alotta folks.
 
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mr2productionz

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#9
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^^^fuck thats 130 miles...lol. maybe you want something closer...lol.
 
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IbThat_bitch

Sicc OG
#14
Jul 16, 2002
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well....

LiL Nando said:
FUCK BITCHES ALL U DO IS LOOK AT THE THREAD AND DONT WRITE SHIT...WELL FUCK U....I WANT FEED BACK NOT FOR SOME BITCHES JUST 2 LOOK AT IT AND NOT SAY N E THING...HOT DAMN DIDNT U READ THE THREAD?
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HOW ABOUT IF I HAVE NOTHING TO SAY, GEEZ I READ THE THREAD, AND I HAVE NO OPINION ON IT REALLY.... BUT SINCE YOU WANT FEEDBACK.... IT WAS 'IGHT.....
 
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J-Sin

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#16
#16

first off.. what is a clocka?

i mean, if someone were to clock something, they would be knockin someone out or making money..

anyway, there is a flow board on siccness.... you'd prolly get more replies if you posted there..

as for this, it's not impressive.. actually, i can't find a flow to it or anything

also, you got a lot of errors in spelling which makes it difficult to read..

like.. what's a chope?

and stuff like "i'ma stick with my jalepeno" and "bitch blow me a kiss"

if you really want to diss a person that raps personally, make fun of their raps, their life, etc..

like when nas said to jay-z "went from shawn carter to jay-z, damn you on jaz dick"

shit like that.. you know the person really well right? expose his covers.. let us know shit that we shouldn't like if he use to wet his bed or he was a bitch in jail or whatever..

and just to let you know.... going to a studio ain't gonna make you sound tight..

peace.
 
LiL Nando

LiL Nando

Sicc OG
#17
May 21, 2002
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mayn if u dont know what a chope is then u smokin....a chope is like a wetback for ur info....u dont know what a jalapeno is?haha pendejo....and mayn maybe u dont know who im talkin about so dont talk on it...my next shit may be bout a bitch like u....so watch out
 
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