FIRST AND FOREMOST I'D LIKE TO COMMENT ON YOUR ALIAS.....
THAT "RIP TEARER" SHIT IS VERY CREATIVE IN MY OPINION. THAT "RIP" AND "TEAR" IS A NICE PLAY ON WORDS, AS YOU COULD USE IT LIKE YOU RIP AND TEAR THE MIC TO BITS, AND THE "ER" AT THE END OF TEAR PERSONIFIES THE WORD SO IT'S AS IF YOU'RE SOMEONE WHO TEARS SHIT..... OBVIOUSLY YOU KNOW THAT AND IT WAS YOUR INTENTION BECAUSE YOU CREATED IT, BUT I JUST HAD TO GIVE PROPS ON THAT. THE "FATAL NYGHTMARE" NAME IS JUST PLAIN SICK.
ON TO THE SONG......
I LIKED THE BEAT, IT HAS A REAL WEST COAST FEEL TO IT. SOMETHING THE GAME MIGHT USE. YOUR FLOW WAS SAV, IT MADE ME WANNA BOB MY HEAD THE WHOLE WAY THROUGH. IT ALSO WENT VERY WELL WITH THE BEAT. THE LYRICS AND WORDPLAY WERE VERY NICE AS USUAL. YOU USE SO MANY RHYMES IT MAKES YOU WANNA KEEP LISTENING TO MAKE SURE YOU CAUGHT EVERYTHING. NOTHING ELEMENTARY ABOUT THIS GUY. THE VOCAL LEVELS SOUNDED GOOD ON MY END, BUT I HAVE A SURROUND SOUND SETUP ON THIS COMPUTER SO IT BRINGS OUT EVERYTHING WHEN I LISTEN TO AN AUDIO. THE HOOK WAS VERY CATCHY....... IT IS NOW STUCK IN MY HEAD, WHICH IS NOT A BAD THING AT ALL. I HATE WHEN SHITTY SONGS GET STUCK IN MY HEAD EVEN THOUGH I HATE THEM. IT'S NICE TO HAVE SOMETHING YOU ACTUALLY LIKE STUCK IN YOUR HEAD.
IT WAS A LITTLE ON THE SHORT SIDE, BUT SOMETIMES IT'S BEST TO KEEP THINGS SHORT AND SWEET. A LOT OF RAPPERS RUIN AN OTHERWISE GOOD SONG BY TRYING TO DO TOO MUCH WITH IT. ALTHOUGH THIS SONG IS SO CATCHY AND IT HAS SUCH A NICE SOUND THAT I DON'T THINK IT WOULD HURT TO ADD A THIRD VERSE TO IT. I KNOW YOU WOULDN'T DISAPPOINT BECAUSE YOU KNOW WHAT YOU'RE DOING WITH THIS RAP SHIT.
OVERALL THIS IS SOMETHING I WOULD DEFINATELY BUMP IN THE RIDE. OF COURSE THE QUALITY COULD BE A LITTLE BETTER BUT I THINK IT'S OUTSTANDING FOR BEING A BEDROOM RECORDING. YOU DEFINATELY NEED TO DROP AN ALBUM IN THE NEAR FUTURE....... YOU HAVE GREAT IDEAS AND CONCEPTS FOR SONGS AND YOU KNOW HOW TO CHOOSE YOUR BEATS, WHICH IS MORE IMPORTANT THAN ONE MIGHT THINK.
I'M AN OFFICIAL FAN OF YOURS HOMIE....... I TRULY BELIEVE YOU CAN MAKE A BIG IMPACT ON THE RAP SCENE WITH THE RIGHT PROMOTION. I KNOW FOR A FACT YOU HAVE THE RIGHT PRODUCT, NOW CREATE IT AND PROMOTE IT. GOOD LUCK DOG, AND KEEP THE TRACKS COMING.
