fact stranger than fiction (true stroy line rap)

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Apr 25, 2002
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i remember the day the pd kicked down my front door/rushin in automatics,12 gauges strapped hardcore/lookin for my bro/whuta ya know?/he skipped town/all because sum fools got live/and thought he was'nt down/about his shit but did'nt see the strap in his waist/gunshots in the night take that to debate/you shoulda known but you were'nt readin-the hostility a pinoy got in his eyes/to their surprise/his nature rise/a homie really was'nt playin/now they fucked up gushin out blood on the street they layin/when it came to the other side dudes got to snitchen/had the nerve to mean mug when they finallyn seen him/(in the courtroom) i thought you knew/but got the game ass backward is a sin/to the game thought you'd come for him in the end?/but for 5 years you never seen him and then/our family went underground/ spending time with visits and packages/never knew we grew up as savages/i was the youngest but a homie always peeped game/now these peers of mine all know the name/would'nt fuck around and disrespect/cause a dude like me got too much stress on my neck/i can't call it even though it's the past/can't forget that shit will always last/so we about ours livin life cuttin off phonys/cause alot of mutherfuckers wanna act like they know me/but we rise and stay above/and for my real homies you know toop will always have luv/for the rest that did'nt know the deal/they can never fade the real/it's a muthafucka especially when it comes to dealin with fakes/cause with a buster we could never relate...


thats it for now but i might come back to it for another verse.
 
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chorus

never knew a muthafucka would come so real/
for all the hatin and debatin yall could never know the deal/
how a G came to be and never turned his back on the game/
now the town is really hectic and the real gone remain/
 
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2nd verse it's like a curse that was brought upon us all/how a frontin ass buster would luv to see us fall/but we rep it for the real and never trip on the petty/but for a fool wantin funk/it's on on sight/strap on the side/satan like a child from the light/cause the dark will fall and the flashes will spark/feel the heat from the 9 when the steal start to bark/silence broken by dogs barkin and bitches screamin/now we in the bucket with sum gin and we leanin/better watch for the creep cause this shit gets real/got a fag in the bag with another cap that was pealed/but enough of the gun play whut you gone do if you get caught/slippen in the town and your body gone wrott/maybe it was just whut you sought/startin shit you could'nt finish now your ass just bought/a ticket to the after life if there's such thing/never know on the other side if the angels gone sing/or maybe eternal fire screams of torture/sumthen for ya/fuck a punk ass busta
 
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All Out HOGG

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#5
SUMTHIN IS MISSING FROM YOUR STYLE...

I WISH I KNEW WHAT IT WAS...BUT THERES SOME ELEMENT BEING NEGLECTED...

ID SUGGEST THAT MAYBE U GO THROUGH & REPLACE SOME'A THE WORDS...THE CONTENT & STORY TELLIN ASPECTS ARE GOOD...BUT THE VOCAB NEEDS'A MAKEOVER...
 
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it's been over a year i'm working on the flow most of all thats the first to come back to me if i work on it.so all the other shit i'll have time for when i get my flows down.
 
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All Out HOGG

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THINK BACK & REMENISS, PICTURE IT -P.D. UNHINGEN MY FRONT DOOR...VICIOUS & VIGEROUS, STRAPPED DOWN WIT SLAYERS HARDCORE...THEY ITCHEN TO SNAG MY BIG BRO...WASN'T NO SUPRISE 2 ME THOU...DONE ALREADY SMOBBED OUT THE TOWN...FOOLS WANTED TO GETT LIVE, DOUBT'N HE DOWN...WASN'T THINKIN OR CONCERNED WIT WHAS INDA WAISTE...HOGGish GLOCKED UP & SETTLED THE DEBATE...THINK FIRST, HOSTILITY THRIVES IN'A PINOYS EYES...CUAGHT EM OFFGUARD 'ELEMENT OF SUPRISE"...ENRAGED, BITCH WE AINT FUCKAN PLAYIN...COLAPSED DOWN, LEAKIN BLOOD 'NOW WHAT WAS U SAYIN"...RIVALS WEARIN PANTIES END UP TATTLE TAIL'N & SNITCHEN...TRYNA ACT GANGSTA WIT BB GUN GLOCKS MEAN MUGGIN WHEN WE SEE EM...I WOULD'A THOUGHT THAT YOU KNEW THEN...SWITCHEN UP & REVERSEN THE CODE INDA STREETS IS'A SIN...I'LL BE HEATED READY WILLIN & WAITEN INDA END...5 YEARS WITHOUT EVER SEEING BIG BRO AGAIN...FUCK THE TURF, WE TAKEN SHIT UNDAGROUND...KEEP FAMILY TIGHT NIT, EVERYBODY READY 2 DUMP ROUNDS...I NEVER LOST LOVE, WEEKLY VISITS DELIVER'N PACKAGES...DIDN'T RELISE I WAS AQQUIREN THE TRADEMARKS OF'A SAVAGE...LIL DUMBFUCK YUNGBUK, BUT I ALWAYS PEEPED GAME...FOUND SELF WORTH IN DOIN DIRT & EARNED'A NAME...GOTT MORE STRESS ON MY NECK THEN'A BITCH WIT BIG TITS...DIDN'T HAVE TO DISRESPECT OR TRIP OFF THE PETTY SHIT...[NEVER FORGET] EVEN IF ITS ONLY MY PAST...YOUR GONE & MEMORIES IS ALL THAS IN MY GRASP...JUST TRYNA MAINTAIN MY LIFE CUTTIN OFF PHONYS...& WHEN IT COMES DOWN 2 IT, NOT NONE OF YALL KNOW ME...ALL THE REAL HOMIES KNOW TOOP & KNOW TOOP GOTT LUV...STRIDE THE FUCK ON TOGETHER, WE GONN RISE ABOVE...THIS FOR THOSE SAV'S INDA STREET WHO KNOW THE DEAL...FUCK A BITCH, FUCK'A BUSTER & FUCK WHAS NOT REAL...SOAK IT UP & IF YA BOUT YA'S BOMB ON THESE SNAKES...WORDS FROM THE WISE, BUT'A BUSTER'&'A BITCH'LL NEVER RELATE

^^^I REWORDED UR FLOW TO GIVE YOU AN EXAMPLE...YA I JUST DID A QUICK JOB SO ITS NOT THE GREATEST...BUT ATLEAST IT EXPLAINS WHAT I MEAN