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TENDING TOWARD LACRIMAL EXHAUSTION & THE BRAND OF REHEBOAM

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An excerpt from Chapter 15 of The Brand Of Reheboam by Stagger P:

Bill could hear chatter and the clanging of glasses from inside the Muddy Cup. He walked up the steps and went inside. It was a loud, boisterous saloon, full of cigar smoke and the stinging scent of fermenting liquor. He tore through the thick cloud of smoke that greeted him at the door and swam through the swirling gray fog past a dozen laughing patrons to the bar. There was no room at the bar, but he hadn't had a drink since the Gehennas, and he'd be damned if he didn't get a taste of some corn liquor. He squeezed between two grimy, hardened men, pushing one aside as placed his elbow on the polished surface. He lifted his hand to signal the bartender.
One of the men that he had nudged aside to get to the bar grabbed Bill's wrist suddenly, gripping it tightly. He was a disgustingly fat man with the pudgy features of a wild boar. His belly was huge and solid from years of chronic drinking, and he had a yellow, jaundiced complexion that spoke of some worsening illness. Even so, the fat man's strength was amazing, and Bill felt as if his wrist would shatter in his grip. Still holding Bill, the fat man made a movement with his other arm like he was going to swing. With lighting quick reflexes, Bill used his free hand to whip out a long dagger, the edge of which was pressed against the man's throat in a blink, the cold steel drawing the slightest trickle of blood from beneath his Adam’s apple. Realizing his compromised position, the fat man loosened his hold on Bill, letting go of his wrist altogether.
The rest of the saloon became aware of the altercation. They quickly fell silent and turned their gazes towards the fat man and Bill.
"You ain't got the balls, boy," the fat man said.
He was testing Bill. Judging by the beads of perspiration that formed on his upper lip, the fat man doubted his own words. The rest of the saloon's patrons watched to see how the stranger would react. Bill knew that if he showed any weakness, they would turn on him and devour him like a pack of rabid dogs. They were a violent bunch, and the only way to communicate with them was through violence. While he had been in a few bar-fights in his time, there had always been a sheriff or a few local deputies to break it up if it had gotten too heated. But here in Scarlet Falls, Bill knew that there would be no one to intervene. It took him only a split second to decide what his course of action would be.
With one sharp flick of his wrist, Bill opened a large gash in the fat man's neck.
For a moment, the wound was wide and bloodless, giving a clear glimpse into the severed purple corridor of his trachea. Then, as if the body suddenly realized the harm that had been inflicted on it, a stream of blood began to pour from the wound. The fat man put his hands to his neck, desperate to close the wound. Blood seeped out of the thin spaces between his fingers, running down his hairy arms and splashing to the ground.
"Jesus Christ," the fat man wheezed, air hissing out of the aperture in his neck.
Bill turned to the rest of the patrons to see if anybody else was going to make a move on him. No one said or did anything. Many of the patrons averted their gaze when Bill looked at them, hiding their faces in their cups. Satisfied that they would offer him no trouble, Bill returned his attention to the fat man. But it was too late. He had made a tragic mistake by turning his back on the fat man. In the space of those few seconds, the fat man had armed himself. Holding his slashed throat with one hand, he swung an unopened bottle of port wine with the other. Bill's reflexes were a fraction of a second too slow, and before he had the chance to duck, the bottle shattered against his skull, blinding his vision and weakening his legs. The dagger fell from his hands. A shower of wine and glass rained down over him, the impact of the blow knocking him to the ground. His head was a jumbled mess of hazy inaction, and he lay there with a stupefied expression on his face. The fat man, clutching the jagged neck of the bottle, stood heaving above him. Blood from his neck trickled down onto Bill, who tried to shake the blue dizziness from his head.
"Finish that sonuvabitch, Buford!" one of the patrons demanded in a voice heavy with whiskey and excitement.
The letting of blood had animated the crowd, and now that Bill was on the ground, some of them had gotten up from their seats to get a better view. The fat man kneeled down over Bill, ready to stick the broken bottle into his face. But his oxygen-starved brain was beginning to cloud over, and he struggled to focus on Bill. He gasped for air, but it slipped out of the gaping wound in his neck before his lungs could absorb it. He was suffocating.
Seeing the fat man hesitate, Bill seized the opportunity. He grabbed the dagger from where it lay beside him on the floor and thrust it up into the fat man's enormous belly, pressing the blade to the hilt directly beneath his ribcage. Bill yanked the blade back out and a spurt of crimson liquid followed. The crowd gasped. A bubble of blood appeared momentarily on the edges of the fat man's mouth and then burst. The broken bottle fell from his hands and landed on the hardwood floor without shattering. With one hand he tried to seal the opening in his neck, and the other he used to cover the wound in his gut. Bill slipped out from underneath the fat man and rose to his feet. The entire upper-half of the fat man was drenched in blood, from his cheeks to his waist. That a man could lose so much blood and still be standing amazed the crowd, and they gawked as he stood there reeling, unwilling to give in. The certainty of his impending death fostered a searing anger within the fat man, and despite his grave injuries, he stumbled forward after Bill. But Bill Carlson was no longer taking any chances. With one calculated swing of his arm, he plunged the entire length of the dagger into the crook behind the fat man's ear, penetrating deep into his skull and putting an instant halt to his forward motion. As the blade pierced the cortex of his brain, the fat man twitched and shook for a moment, only to go limp and collapse completely when Bill withdrew the dagger from his skull.
With the fat man dead, the crowd retreated back away from Bill. The one who had yelled for the fat man to finish Bill sipped his cup nervously. Breathing heavily over the enormous corpse, Bill continued to clutch the blood-soaked knife. Two men from one of the tables sheepishly came over and grabbed the fat man at either end. They strained to lift him off the ground and lumbered out of the saloon with the fat man's carcass. Bill was covered in blood, both his own and that of the fat man. He was bleeding from a large gash on the forehead where the bottle had broken, and the throbbing pain that began there went outward in terrible pulsating waves. He wiped the dagger across his shirt and leaned against the bar for support.
"Shot a whiskey," he said to the bartender, the pain in his head making the words tumble out slowly.
The bartender filled a small glass to the brim with whiskey and passed it to Bill. He swallowed the entire thing and put the glass back on the table.
"Hell, give me a whole bottle," he said, making his way to an empty table at the far end of the bar.
 
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An excerpt from Part 3, Chapter 9 of Tending Toward Lacrimal Exhaustion by Stagger P:
"How much do you have?"
"About seven ounces," Taylor replied.
"And how much are you looking to get?” Danny asked, swallowing the shot of gin.
"Well, it's worth about ten grand on the street, so-"
"Fuck the street value. That changes every goddamned day depending on where you are and who you go to. Street value ain't got no bearing on our conversation." Taylor was irritated by the tone of Danny's voice, and was suddenly on the defensive.
"My point is," Taylor boomed, "Is that you can probably get upwards of ten thousand dollars if you sold it on the streets." The Shark could sense the tension between the two, but refrained from interrupting. This was their business, not his.
"So are you asking that much, or what?"
Taylor considered this before answering.
"Seventy five hundred," he said after a short pause.
"Seventy five hundred--? You must be out of your fucking mind! Shit, I could cook some meth for less than half of that."
"I doubt it," Taylor growled, eyes aflame.
"Let me see the product before I make any decisions."
Taylor reached into his back pocket, removing the package and putting it onto the coffee table. The more he spoke with Danny, the more he not only disliked him, but distrusted him as well. Taylor began to carefully unwrap the package, and as he did, the room filled with the overpoweringly acrid scent of Methamphetamine. Once it was opened, he pushed the package to Danny.
"Go ahead. Try it," he roused, voice still filled with anger.
"Don't mind if I do," Danny replied, opening the cabinet beside him. He withdrew two small needles still sealed in their package, plus a third, larger hypodermic, which Taylor assumed was Danny's personal rig. He distributed the packaged needles to his companions.
"This ain't no yellow street crank, man. We don't need to shoot it to get high," Taylor complained, uneasy at the sight of the needles. He had never used needles in his life, unlike the Shark who was known to indulge now and again.
"If it's as good as you say it is, then we'll all know for sure in a minute,” Danny said. “And don't think I'm gonna slam this shit by myself. Muthafuckas have tried to give me hot shots before, and, well, no one’s succeeded so far. Here’s what’s gonna happen: We’re all gonna shoot it. That way I'll know you ain't trying to pass off no pieces of broken windshield to me."
"Man, Danny, you've known me long enough to know that I'm not gonna come here with some bunk shit. Have I ever let you down?" the Shark asked.
"It ain't you who I'm buying it from," Danny retorted. "Now listen, we gonna do this shit up, then we'll see if we can't come to some sort of agreement."
"I don't like needles," Taylor reiterated, speaking to no one in particular, trying to convince himself.
"Well I don't like fucking up my damn sinuses sniffing that shit, okay? We all shoot this, and then we'll all know how the guy next to us is feeling, then nobody tries to pull any shit on anyone else, right?" He received no further protest from Taylor. The gin, along with the lines of crystal he'd snorted, had given Taylor a feeling of invincibility. If he was ever going to slam dope, it might as well have been then. Danny scooped out about a gram and a half of meth, crushing the rocks into a fine, crystalline powder. He pulled out a small plastic bag that contained his trusty spoon, a lighter, a few cotton swabs, and a small vial of water.
He went about melting the meth in the water ritualistically, not so much as batting an eye as he drew the solution through the cotton and up into the needle. Danny opened the two smaller syringes, following the same ritual for them as he had for his. He passed them out.
"Do you juveniles know how to shoot this, or are you gonna need me to hold your hand?" he asked them.
"I can do my own, thank you very much," Clark replied. "I'll do up this cat, too," he said, motioning to Taylor. "I've seen you miss too many veins in your day," he said, heckling Danny. It was true, Clark had seen Danny many times miss the vein altogether and inject directly beneath the skin.
"Fuck you," Danny spat back, angered by the Shark's comment.
For a second, his thoughts turned to his sick sister in the other room. Just as quickly though, they returned to the task at hand. He had already removed his belt and tied it around his arm, tapping his vein to make it rise.
"Are you guys gonna sit there and gawk like a bunch of bitches or are you gonna get this show on the fucking road?" he growled, piercing his arm with the needle and pressing the knob down to its hilt. The veins on his neck bulged and his eyes rolled back into his skull. The Shark began to remove his belt, motioning to Taylor.
"I'll do you up first," he stated, wrapping the belt around Taylor's arm. He felt as if he were having an out of body experience as the Shark slipped the needle into his arm. Taylor seemed to be watching the whole scene from some vertical vantagepoint. He watched as Danny shut his eyes and clenched his jaw tightly before removing the syringe from his arm. Taylor felt the sudden rush of the crystal as Clark finished the injection, tasting it in his throat as it exploded in his chest. He lurched forward, groaning as his body spasmed. He ejaculated uncontrollably into his pants, but there was no orgasm, only the release of semen as the electricity of the crystal flowed through his body. He looked over at Danny, whose entire demeanor had changed. His eyes were large and wild, frantically scanning the room with their new found stimulant perspective. Taylor felt as if his heart would tear in two. He had never been so high. No, not in his entire life. He found himself wondering why he had always been so reluctant to use needles. At that moment, he could not think of any legitimate reason.
It feels so fucking good, he found himself repeating in his head.
"Holy shit,” Danny exclaimed, overwhelmed by the meth. "Holy fucking shit on a golden fucking platter." His entire body was tense. Bulging veins snaked around the edge of his brow, pulsating erratically. The Shark was busy giving himself a shot, all the more anxious because the other two had already received theirs.
Taylor was suddenly awash in inexpressible feelings for Alison. He believed that, at that point, he loved her more than he ever had before. Of course it was just the speed playing with his emotions, but he was not aware of that. He had the urge to get the deal over with as soon as possible so that he could return home to her. He glanced over at Clark, who was just beginning to feel the shot. Then he turned his gaze toward Danny, who appeared as if he were on the verge of some sort of religious ecstasy.
"Holy shit,” Danny continued to mutter.
Clark was feeling the effects, but, unlike Danny and Taylor, it filled him with a sense of dread. He found himself uneasy about the individuals he was with. Shooting the meth had been too much for him. It induced a feeling of acute trepidation in him, playing on his self-doubts and amplifying them. As his heart fluttered in his chest, he found himself afraid. Sure, it was a stimulant induced paranoia, but he could not differentiate between that and genuine danger. The cool evening air had conspired against him. He was reminded of the acid he had taken the previous day, and how all of the consternation in his head would not allow him to sleep. Now, after the injection of the crystal, sleep would surely not be an option. He would have to grapple with the negativity that brewed inside of him and attempt to quell it any way that he could.
The three sat there, each aware of the others, but too wrapped up in their own thoughts to pay anyone else attention. Danny hated to admit it, but he was quite impressed with the quality of the dope. He had shot a great deal of speed in his day, and even he would have to agree that this was the best he'd had since Johnny Eight Finger's Ice had flooded the streets. His mood had lifted since he tied-off, and he was no longer so concerned with swindling Taylor out of money. After a great deal of consideration, he turned to Taylor, eyes bulging.
"Seven," he said matter-of-factly.
"What?" Taylor replied, shaking Alison from his thoughts.
"Seven grand. That's it." Taylor mulled over Danny's proposal, glancing at Clark for input. Clark wasn't listening to them. His eyes were wide and fixed on some unseen point in the room, compulsively listing all of his faults to himself. Taylor would get no help from him. He had purchased the meth for five thousand dollars originally, so every penny over that was profit. He decided to take Danny's offer before it was retracted. "So, what to do you say,” Danny pressed.
"Fine," Taylor declared, imagining what he would do with the additional two thousand that he would be taking home. Danny bustled over to his dope cabinet, opening it and removing a large manila envelope from inside. He opened it, removing a handful of cash. He came back over and sat down, counting the money in front of Taylor. It was in denominations of twenty and fifty, bills that had certainly been circulated throughout the drug underworld for sometime. Danny counted it lighting fast three times, the crystal giving him superhuman processing abilities, before passing the pile of bills over to Taylor. He stuffed them in his pocket.
"Nice doing business with you,” Danny said with a with a none-to-subtle tone of sarcasm in his voice.