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NEWARKKILLA4NIA

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Apr 2, 2003
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WUZUP HOMIEZ.... I BEEN MAKIN GRAFICS FOR A KOO MINUTE AND I FINALLY MADE SOMETHING I FEEL IS WORTH POSTING UP ON HERE. I MADE THIS CD COVER 4 A HOMIE I HAVE, NAMED MUMBLES.... WELL ANYWAY, I BEEN DOIN A WHOLE BUNCH OF GRAFICS AND I FINALLY FEEL THAT IM GOOD ENOUGH TO START MAKING SHIT FOR OTHER PEOPLE, WHO AINT HOMIES.... (WELL I THINK IM GOOD ENOUGH ANYWAY LOL ) SO IF SOMEONE WHO KNOWS WHAT THEY ARE TALKING ABOUT AND HAS A REAL COMMENT THAT WOULD HELP ME OUT IN DOING MY THANG, HIT ME UP.... PLEASE, EVERYONE PEEP THIS SHIT OUT AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK AND WHAT SHOULD B ADDED/TAKEN OFF.... AND OH YEA, MY HOMIE WANNA KNO IF HAVING THAT 38 ON THERE IS TOO HOT? THANKS FOR YOUR TIME....

-YUNG DUB 4RM WE$T END NEWARK....

P.S.

FOR A BETTER PIC OF THA THANG, GO TO :

http://www.cali-stylez.net/vb/showthread.php?s=&threadid=2354

CUZ SICCNESS WONT LET ME POST THE PIC WITH ITS ACTUAL PIXELZ N SIZE N ALL DAT
 
Chevy Man

Chevy Man

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Jan 26, 2003
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yeah itz tight (better than shit i be pullin, look at my site you'll see)...but i agree wit homeboy up herre^^^ check that art forum one time fa sho
 
HOGGLIFE

HOGGLIFE

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May 21, 2002
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I THINK ITS TIGHT. WHAT I WOULD DO WITH THE TEXT , I LIKE THE FONT JUST MAYBE OUTLINE IT A LIL SO ITS EASIER TO READ. AND LIGHTEN UP THE BACKGROUND SO YOU CAN READ DECOTO PLUS THE PIC IS CLEAN .
 
MEXCOM

MEXCOM

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Feb 9, 2003
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This is just some constructive criticism:
1) Like Oso said make the homie more visible, make him stand out more. I think one way you could do this is to keep his picture untouched, it looks like you've "reddened" it.
2) I think the cant be reached text should be smaller and not flashy (not that it is right now, but try and keep it the same or similar).
3)I like the bandana thing, but what about if instead of having that as your background you make that your text. Make the mumblez text be a bandana color.
4) Make the word Mumble$ smaller, I think it takes away from your homies pic.
5) maybe lower the parental advisory sign. If you make the word mumbles take up less space lenght-wise you could probably place the advisory thing next to it somewhere on the bottom.

These are just things that I think could help, but either way, good job.
 
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NEWARKKILLA4NIA

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#11
Apr 2, 2003
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HERE GOES DA UPDATED VERSION.... N TO THA HOMIE THAT SAID TO USE DA BANDANA BACKROUND 4 THA FONT.... I HAVE NO IDEA HOW TO DO DAT.... IF SOMEONE KNO HOW TO DO DAT, HIT ME UP.... BUT I DID WUT EVERYONE ON HERE SAID..... SO HOLLA BACK N TELL ME WUT YALL THINK SO FAR.... I THINK IT DID MAKE IT BETTER, SINCE EVERY1 ON HERE SEEN ENOUGH ALBUM COVERS TO SAY THEY KNO WHATS GOOD N WHATS NOT
 
MEXCOM

MEXCOM

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#13
Feb 9, 2003
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Yeah shit looks alot better,It has more of a focus on the homie instead of the letterin. As for the bandana font, I don't know how but It would be cool if someone knew how to make that shit.
 
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YOUNG BREW

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Apr 25, 2002
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i think the graphix are on point..but its too much red...it kinda drowns out the overall concept becuz certain things dont stand out as much as they should

regardless its good work
 
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