Eastwood vs Lee
- Thread starter MrDontGIVEaFUCK
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SHORT SHITTY DOO DOO
LIKE...
LEE MUST OF BEEN DESTINED-2-DIE,WHY MESS WIT THA WOOD,IM MESSIN-UP-LIVES,POINT TECHZ-ATCHA-EYES 2 LESSON-YA-SIGHT,IM BLESSIN-THA-MIC WIT DEATH WHEN-I-TYPE//
STRAIGHT WRECCIN-YO-FLIGHT,YOU'LL NEVA BE UPHEAVED 2 MY RANK,AND-FUCC-WASTIN-HOLLOWZ-ILL-KILL-YA-FAKE-ASS-CREW-WIT-SOME-BLANKZ,DOUBLE BARRELS SMOKIN DANK//
ILL HAVE UR OBITUARY PICTURE BY A SCRIPTURE IN BLOOD-BANKZ//
IM DOCTOR GIGGLES USIN MALPRACTICE ON THIS NIGGA,BOUNCE ON YA BOWELZ LIKE A MATRESS WIT SPRINGLESS TRIGGAZ//
PHYSICIAN ON THE SIDE,DONT ALWAYZ OPERATE WIT-DA-HEATAZ,
HAVE YA INTESTINES ON SOME RYE,SIPPIN ON TYE MARGARITAS,
U WOULDN'T BE SICC IF U WAS INJECTED WIT STDZ AS A FETUS,
LEAVE U MEAT-LESS IN THA STREET-WITH TIX FROM OLD PARKIN METERZ//
NO TIME CUZZ,& THE INTERNET CONN KEEP GETTIN LOST
IF U DONT EAT THIS...YA SKILLZ MUST BE THE CAUSE
ESC 805 MCC 11ST
LIKE...
LEE MUST OF BEEN DESTINED-2-DIE,WHY MESS WIT THA WOOD,IM MESSIN-UP-LIVES,POINT TECHZ-ATCHA-EYES 2 LESSON-YA-SIGHT,IM BLESSIN-THA-MIC WIT DEATH WHEN-I-TYPE//
STRAIGHT WRECCIN-YO-FLIGHT,YOU'LL NEVA BE UPHEAVED 2 MY RANK,AND-FUCC-WASTIN-HOLLOWZ-ILL-KILL-YA-FAKE-ASS-CREW-WIT-SOME-BLANKZ,DOUBLE BARRELS SMOKIN DANK//
ILL HAVE UR OBITUARY PICTURE BY A SCRIPTURE IN BLOOD-BANKZ//
IM DOCTOR GIGGLES USIN MALPRACTICE ON THIS NIGGA,BOUNCE ON YA BOWELZ LIKE A MATRESS WIT SPRINGLESS TRIGGAZ//
PHYSICIAN ON THE SIDE,DONT ALWAYZ OPERATE WIT-DA-HEATAZ,
HAVE YA INTESTINES ON SOME RYE,SIPPIN ON TYE MARGARITAS,
U WOULDN'T BE SICC IF U WAS INJECTED WIT STDZ AS A FETUS,
LEAVE U MEAT-LESS IN THA STREET-WITH TIX FROM OLD PARKIN METERZ//
NO TIME CUZZ,& THE INTERNET CONN KEEP GETTIN LOST
IF U DONT EAT THIS...YA SKILLZ MUST BE THE CAUSE
ESC 805 MCC 11ST
jezuz, all yall needa learn how to vote right... dam, how you gonna just throw up someone's name an not gve a explanation on how you voted, wtf....?
anywayZ.....
"LEE MUST OF BEEN DESTINED-2-DIE,WHY MESS WIT THA WOOD,IM MESSIN-UP-LIVES,POINT TECHZ-ATCHA-EYES 2 LESSON-YA-SIGHT,IM BLESSIN-THA-MIC WIT DEATH WHEN-I-TYPE//"
...alright, 'Eastwood'- that was a good opening line... you got a coupple good multiZ in your whole verse. though, there were a few barz where you used false shit.... for example.....
"STRAIGHT WRECCIN-YO-FLIGHT,YOU'LL NEVA BE UPHEAVED 2 MY RANK, AND-FUCC-WASTIN-HOLLOWZ-ILL-KILL-YA-FAKE-ASS-CREW-WIT-SOME-BLANKZ,DOUBLE BARRELS SMOKIN DANK//"
.... where the fuck are the multiZ in that? 'wreccin-yo-flight' .... 'and-fucc-wastin-hollowz-ill-kill-ya-fake-ass-crew-wit-some blankz'..... none of that shit rhyme, you needa learn how to use that shit properly....
"U WOULDN'T BE SICC IF U WAS INJECTED WIT STDZ AS A FETUS,
LEAVE U MEAT-LESS IN THA STREET-WITH TIX FROM OLD PARKIN METERZ//
NO TIME CUZZ,& THE INTERNET CONN KEEP GETTIN LOST
IF U DONT EAT THIS...YA SKILLZ MUST BE THE CAUSE"
..... to me that was good... i like the way you ended this. but other than that, from what i stated... you came so-so, don't get me wrong tho.. it flowed well... but maybe next time you should try an throw in a lil more punchez... an don't type in CAPS cause its hard on the eyes.... dam.....
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an as for mr. 'LEE'
"THEY CALL U EASTWOOD CUZ U BROKE URE DICC NOW IT POINTS TO THE RIGHT/
U HOLD THE MIC LIKE U HOLD A BIG FAT DICC POINTED IN URE EYES/"
.... okay, now wtf was that...? did that make any sence..? cause to me it sure didnt. but ummmm, shouldn't your first coupple lines be the hardest, so that it grabs the readers attention an make you wanna read more, than a weak opening line, where your like wtf, an don't wanna contuine readin...? i'd think so.... cause that was horrible... actually, i think you could have done without that whole 'first verse', cause to me it was wack as hell.. an it didn't do nothin to your whole post but make me not wanna read anymore....
"I SAW EASTWOOD UP IN A CHAT ROOM TALKIN BOUT WHOS DOWN FOR GROUP CYBER SEX/
U LIEN BITCH ILL ELIMINATE URE WHOLE ENTIRE TEXT/UZE A ROOKIE IM A VET/"
IF URE BITCH ASS SMILEZ ILL KNOCK URE FACE IN AND HAVE U SHIT OUT TEETH TILES/
THE SHIT U BE RAPPIN ABOUT TELLS ME U WAS MOLESTED AS A CHILD/"
... chea, that was the funniest shit outta everything you typed... the 2nd verse was a lot better than the 1st. i wasn't really feelin the endin tho. oh yea... also, as stated above... DON'T POST IN CAPS!!!
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now, for my rating....
Originality~ Lee
MultiZ~ Eastwood
PuncheZ~ Lee
Comedy~ Lee
.... thatZ all that you need in your battle to pull off a win... other shit would just be filler lines... so im gonna have to say that... Lee got this...
vote= Lee
anywayZ.....
"LEE MUST OF BEEN DESTINED-2-DIE,WHY MESS WIT THA WOOD,IM MESSIN-UP-LIVES,POINT TECHZ-ATCHA-EYES 2 LESSON-YA-SIGHT,IM BLESSIN-THA-MIC WIT DEATH WHEN-I-TYPE//"
...alright, 'Eastwood'- that was a good opening line... you got a coupple good multiZ in your whole verse. though, there were a few barz where you used false shit.... for example.....
"STRAIGHT WRECCIN-YO-FLIGHT,YOU'LL NEVA BE UPHEAVED 2 MY RANK, AND-FUCC-WASTIN-HOLLOWZ-ILL-KILL-YA-FAKE-ASS-CREW-WIT-SOME-BLANKZ,DOUBLE BARRELS SMOKIN DANK//"
.... where the fuck are the multiZ in that? 'wreccin-yo-flight' .... 'and-fucc-wastin-hollowz-ill-kill-ya-fake-ass-crew-wit-some blankz'..... none of that shit rhyme, you needa learn how to use that shit properly....
"U WOULDN'T BE SICC IF U WAS INJECTED WIT STDZ AS A FETUS,
LEAVE U MEAT-LESS IN THA STREET-WITH TIX FROM OLD PARKIN METERZ//
NO TIME CUZZ,& THE INTERNET CONN KEEP GETTIN LOST
IF U DONT EAT THIS...YA SKILLZ MUST BE THE CAUSE"
..... to me that was good... i like the way you ended this. but other than that, from what i stated... you came so-so, don't get me wrong tho.. it flowed well... but maybe next time you should try an throw in a lil more punchez... an don't type in CAPS cause its hard on the eyes.... dam.....
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an as for mr. 'LEE'
"THEY CALL U EASTWOOD CUZ U BROKE URE DICC NOW IT POINTS TO THE RIGHT/
U HOLD THE MIC LIKE U HOLD A BIG FAT DICC POINTED IN URE EYES/"
.... okay, now wtf was that...? did that make any sence..? cause to me it sure didnt. but ummmm, shouldn't your first coupple lines be the hardest, so that it grabs the readers attention an make you wanna read more, than a weak opening line, where your like wtf, an don't wanna contuine readin...? i'd think so.... cause that was horrible... actually, i think you could have done without that whole 'first verse', cause to me it was wack as hell.. an it didn't do nothin to your whole post but make me not wanna read anymore....
"I SAW EASTWOOD UP IN A CHAT ROOM TALKIN BOUT WHOS DOWN FOR GROUP CYBER SEX/
U LIEN BITCH ILL ELIMINATE URE WHOLE ENTIRE TEXT/UZE A ROOKIE IM A VET/"
IF URE BITCH ASS SMILEZ ILL KNOCK URE FACE IN AND HAVE U SHIT OUT TEETH TILES/
THE SHIT U BE RAPPIN ABOUT TELLS ME U WAS MOLESTED AS A CHILD/"
... chea, that was the funniest shit outta everything you typed... the 2nd verse was a lot better than the 1st. i wasn't really feelin the endin tho. oh yea... also, as stated above... DON'T POST IN CAPS!!!
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now, for my rating....
Originality~ Lee
MultiZ~ Eastwood
PuncheZ~ Lee
Comedy~ Lee
.... thatZ all that you need in your battle to pull off a win... other shit would just be filler lines... so im gonna have to say that... Lee got this...
vote= Lee
