E-40 T-Shirt GOUDA...more to come

[BayBoss420]

I made this shirt as the first one in a line of shirts that have E-40s lingo on them. I know I'm gonna make one for "Turtle" and a couple others. Feedback please

 

[C-4]

i guess that's what you call BIG money

or large amounts haha

 

[Defy]

yeah, I'm not feeling the "money"

 

[BayBoss420]

^^is it too out proportion or do you not like the design on it

 

[kingsvillektp]

the money is too big... kinda too dark... but it works...

 

[BayBoss420]

^thanks. maybe ill use differnt colors or sumthin or give 40 a stroke

 

[BayBoss420]

is it my design concept, or how well its done that I need to step it up in

 

[BayBoss420]

well it was supposed to just be a transfer, thats y everythings in a box

 

[Blazelazy]

I like the concept,but the fetti is 2 BIG.


Reminds me of that JT the FIG "who grind like us?" where he sitt'n next to a pile of money that looks so unproportioned it looks hella FAKE.

 

[Blazelazy]

resize the bread

 

[kingsvillektp]

^thanks. maybe ill use differnt colors or sumthin or give 40 a stroke

hmmm, Make the stroke be the same color as the E-40 text in the background that way nothing will clash...

 

[Tycoonin]

Goudoutta here with that design. It aint workin brah sales at the flea market aint gonna happen

 

[BayBoss420]

^^haha this guy...I figured people on here would be mature enuff to offer constructive critasism but i guess not lol hate on me if you want. Your only wasting your own time, time im spending on improving and making GOUDA.

 

[FUNKYFRE$H707]

imo i dont think you need all the e-40s in the background like most people already said the money is too big, try not to make it too stiff, looks like giant cardboard money to me...
u should throw earls glasses up on his face
and maybe play with some more fonts

oh yeah an i wouldnt make any designs with mac dre on em, you'll have faggs crying askin if u had permission to use mac dres face... lol

 

[BayBoss420]

yeah I really agree with you on the E-40s...im gonna have to rethink the color scheme or sumtin or put a stroke on him so u can see him

 

[Tycoonin]

Some constructive critasism hmmm. Start over. You have 2 conflicting messages on the design. Are you selling E-40 or Gouda? The money graphics look really fake the fonts are boring and E-40 is a pretty fat cat so his silouette adds nothing to the image it takes up space.

 

[BayBoss420]

thats already all been posted, thanks tho. well except the thing about 2 conflicting messages...It's a line of T-Shirts about E-40s slang, such as GOUDA. It's an E-40 quote thats they're both on there.