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Apr 23, 2003
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first off.... mixing was shitty..

who said "the bay" ain't yall from washington?

i could be wrong..


sounds like you didn't write to the beat and if you did, well.. both of yall rushed lines like it was the thing to do..


snare sounded 80's ish, beat was cool i guess... hook is cool..

dubb rode the beat better but uh.. you don't sound polished..

suspect doesn't fit on this song.. shorten the bars or just i don't know..


it's cool but the worst thing about this was the mixing.. vocals were way too loud..

i guess.. keep at it.. and just get better.

and the title makes no sense with what yall were talking about.. this sounds like a bunch of verses and a hook that were just thrown together..

peace.
 
Aug 4, 2002
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allright man, thanks for peein it regardless..

the mixing IS shitty. i did it all on fruity loops and acid pro, recorded with a pc mic.

and the verses were thrown in there like u thought, my hook was off the top of my head. and im glad the snare sounds 80s ish, thats exactly what i was going for when i made it.. so yeah.. thanks for checkin it out dogg
 
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I like your rhymes. Mixing of the beat is.... well, it sucks. After every 2 loops, the beat starts over like .10 milliseconds late. The second dude's flow is... maybe the beat is too fast.

But as far as entertainment value, 5/10. Where you from, you got a strange accent.
 
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o yeah my bad homie, i took Hafts advice and changed the name to "Givin It Up"

thats the one we just "finished".

yeah, were hopin to put out the framework and get into a local studio round here to record it for the real shit.

im from Tacoma, Washington.. south of seattle, ive had customers at work askin me where im from cuz of the same thing... askin if im from the south and shit.. i guess its a northwest accent.. aight man, thanks for peeping