DrEaMz

[x-kalibur]

I'm in this world all alone, every small step I take it seems I've grown..
Learning from my mistakes, people sayin I don't got what it takes so I get savage..
This is for the haters, I'm above average.. At the prime of the rhyme so whats yours is mine..
Nothing in return.. Earned my stripes, got no concern for gripes.. I'm just tryin to get by..
An eye for an eye, bitchs wonder why I do this.. Ain't no fun, my destiny is to persue-this..
Reguardless of the he-say she-say.. The world must pay, I'm pullin colombines with a Tre-eight..
People screamin NO WAIT!.. Fuck em, I'm lettin loose.. I have no excuse not to spray-em..
Lay-em down and look for the rest.. listen to em crying and tear drops, hear cops It's too much..
Aimin and cavin-in my chest, bullets ringin through hallways.. I know I've gone to the extreme..
Three minutes later.. I'm wakin up in a cold sweat, realizin.. It was nothing but a bad-dream..

 

[KODOGG]

The world must pay, I'm pullin colombines with a Tre-eight..
People screamin NO WAIT!.. Fuck em, I'm lettin loose.. I have no excuse not to spray-em..

^^ Once again those lines hittin me hard..

'n i wanna shoot ma school.. ` I only like like 3 people there.

 

[All Out HOGG]

I felt this whole shit...impresive compared to summa ya other work

 

[Chaos]

Aimin and cavin-in my chest, bullets ringin through hallways.. I know I've gone to the extreme..
Three minutes later.. I'm wakin up in a cold sweat, realizin.. It was nothing but a bad-dream..

I like the way you finished it with these two lines... pretty clean

 

[Xiao 'Velvet]

that shit was cool cuddie but it was confuseing as fuck ta read

 

[x-kalibur]

uppin..