does anyone wanna battle?
- Thread starter CHRISHOGGALYPSE
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right on bro, i'll post up some shit tomorrow. Don't worry, i'm not gonna be up all night writing, it's 1:19am here in on Christmas, i ain't gonna stay up to write lyrics for an online battle lol. but i should have something up by tomorrow. I guess we'll say first to 7 votes......1 round if that's cool with you.....late
don't take this to heart homie lol
Maaaan, look at dvious,
Forever talking about demon shit,
You probably live more holy than 36 Jesus’
You talk that g shit
But you’re less street than the tv show host Regis is,
You talk about your hoes,
But you really choking on penises,
You claim to be smokin in weed
But really just breathe in kids,
You ain’t gotta tell me,
Man I know I’m obscenely sick
I punch harder than golotta
And kick harder than bruce lee flicks,
My nutts will bruise your chin,
Cause you’re pullin my dick through your lips,
As soon as my rooster spits,
I’m saying “back the hell off my bitch!”
It ain’t no “secret”….
I’ll roll on you like your “Ph balanced deodorant,”
You’re cool like a “summers eve,”
But I’m hotter than stolen shit,
I know you’re from the wash but I control the whole north west,
I’ll steal your soul and leave a scorched hole in ya vest,
With a stack of smoke and ashes floatin in ya cortez….////
Maaaan, look at dvious,
Forever talking about demon shit,
You probably live more holy than 36 Jesus’
You talk that g shit
But you’re less street than the tv show host Regis is,
You talk about your hoes,
But you really choking on penises,
You claim to be smokin in weed
But really just breathe in kids,
You ain’t gotta tell me,
Man I know I’m obscenely sick
I punch harder than golotta
And kick harder than bruce lee flicks,
My nutts will bruise your chin,
Cause you’re pullin my dick through your lips,
As soon as my rooster spits,
I’m saying “back the hell off my bitch!”
It ain’t no “secret”….
I’ll roll on you like your “Ph balanced deodorant,”
You’re cool like a “summers eve,”
But I’m hotter than stolen shit,
I know you’re from the wash but I control the whole north west,
I’ll steal your soul and leave a scorched hole in ya vest,
With a stack of smoke and ashes floatin in ya cortez….////
I got a good laugh readin this rap from this cat
it's so wack in fact folx read it and still said where the fucks CHRIS at
an assassin when I hit the keys..I'ma make this a fast hit
this dumb bitch tried to smoke crack but could't keep his ass lit
like all my past spits..this high class shit'll leave this HOGG slaughtered
this siccness GOD father just got bothered..it's sink or swim bitch..now ya in hot water
fuck it...I forgot about this shit..I know it's short as hell but all good....it's all in fun ghost
it's so wack in fact folx read it and still said where the fucks CHRIS at
an assassin when I hit the keys..I'ma make this a fast hit
this dumb bitch tried to smoke crack but could't keep his ass lit
like all my past spits..this high class shit'll leave this HOGG slaughtered
this siccness GOD father just got bothered..it's sink or swim bitch..now ya in hot water
fuck it...I forgot about this shit..I know it's short as hell but all good....it's all in fun ghost
yes, Dvious took it.
Chris, if you're gonna battle you should get sum shit on the opponent and if you dont know shit about them i suggest you not make things up. Dvious doesnt talk about demon shit, or G shit, or hoes, or smoking weed, and i dont think he sports cortez'. so every attempt you made at a direct hit, you missed. that, plus the fact that Dvious' rhymes are better, is why Dvious won this.
Chris, if you're gonna battle you should get sum shit on the opponent and if you dont know shit about them i suggest you not make things up. Dvious doesnt talk about demon shit, or G shit, or hoes, or smoking weed, and i dont think he sports cortez'. so every attempt you made at a direct hit, you missed. that, plus the fact that Dvious' rhymes are better, is why Dvious won this.
i knew you guys were gonna say that, but the rhymes were deeper than face value on damn near every single line. i can understand if i missed about the shit i thought he talked about.....i should've lost right away. but my rhymes were deeper than his. i know it wasn't the best shit ever or anything, but his wasn't great either. it's all good. chalk it as a loss. i think i confused him with someone else to be honest......hence, the demons, hoes etc...... lol oh well
@chrishogg........nah...I'm the one you were talkin about...cuz you commented on my religious beliefs on one of my threads called Words of an Athiest...and also pretty much said my rhymes were weak...I think you gave them a 6/10....all good I ain't trippin,just lettin you know that you had the right person...I think....
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@ dvious
that's kinda funny, cause i don't even remember commenting on your shit lol, but i thought i did remember seeing you write about demons or something to that effect.
@ironic
no love loss, like i said, i didnt' think my shit was the greatest either. i didn't put much effort into it, as you can see the difference in the lyrics i had on the other thread, and these. these were written very quickly as i believe a "battle" should not be something you plan out, i think it should be as quickly as you can write them. the only reason i said the shit is a lot deeper than face value, is because my homeboy peeped the lyrics when i posted em up, and he didn't know what like 5 of the lines were, i understand that it woud be easy to over look what they are saying (ex...it ain't no "secret"....ph balanced deodorant....more or less saying he's a bitch instead of coming out and sayin it you kno?)it's all good tho aye, everyone's entitled to their opinion, stay up
that's kinda funny, cause i don't even remember commenting on your shit lol, but i thought i did remember seeing you write about demons or something to that effect.
@ironic
no love loss, like i said, i didnt' think my shit was the greatest either. i didn't put much effort into it, as you can see the difference in the lyrics i had on the other thread, and these. these were written very quickly as i believe a "battle" should not be something you plan out, i think it should be as quickly as you can write them. the only reason i said the shit is a lot deeper than face value, is because my homeboy peeped the lyrics when i posted em up, and he didn't know what like 5 of the lines were, i understand that it woud be easy to over look what they are saying (ex...it ain't no "secret"....ph balanced deodorant....more or less saying he's a bitch instead of coming out and sayin it you kno?)it's all good tho aye, everyone's entitled to their opinion, stay up
you're not supposed to confuse people with your flows. i caught that but i dont know if anyone else did. but, even though they may have caught it as well, it still doesnt make up for lack of wordplay, lack of content, lack of punches, lack of metaphors, etc.... Dvious took you on every level of the game. work on rhymes, especially multis, start using metaphors and similis, and throw sum punchlines in there. if you're gonna battle you're not gonna win unless you learn the battle scene.