Deuce Drop's a verse

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Sit up in your seats.....Class begins In

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Yo,My existence is written erased or scribbled as fiction
Steerin this civic with the mind thats efficient
My brain is prison, trapped behind bars of scriptures
The psyko commissions, the driven well it's a mixture
I'm the other significant like the garbage by Bizkit
Crucial vengeance in measurements in my wrist is the siccness
Refusin' too mention that my intentions are vicious
Aggression in sequece they know I'm eager existin'
Havin' competitions inflictin' my pencils friction
Convinced my lyrics are sins in that they need to be Christianed
Listen to lyrics with evil spirits to Bishops
Baptists an' Catholic don't have the magic I vision
Satan smiles with vengeance, I'm his twin in this business
Take it further in murder lyrically with my fitness
Don't need a army or missles lined up like Clinton
Livin' a instant, this life journeys a mission
I've witnessed collisions, now they got me suspended
Formulas formin', cells remain in ignition
But turn this key slowly, don't operate psyko driven


Lil' drop .....For you LYRICAL Heads' out there....Hit your fam bacc with feedbacc be it negative or otherwise.....Krooked Konceptz




Deuce


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cool shit homie its good to see old faces that can drop it on here again. alotta these new kids are bringin the board down

Curt....What's decent with it cuzz ?,Where you been at potna ? Most definatly loc,Deuce is not the type to name names but about 10-12 youngstas comes to mind when you said this....Damn shame huh ?
The board needs to be re-vitalised,But am I sayin' anything that ain't be stated already ?.......No.

Be safe with it cuzzo

D aka Pro-DEUCE-in genocide concernin' fake individuals


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''Good spittens'' lol....What's up Mistah MVP,You addressed the cat's on the board as to your alias Switch Yet ?


D

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i like it, i cant really decypher a lot of it, but then again only the writer is ever going to know exactly what hes trying to convey.

cool shit.. elevation.....
 
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Nice I lykez it alot, alot of complex rhymes definently not simple 10 yr old shit.. I think it would sound better spitted vocally by da creator.. :) btw Whatz the beef wit new people on da board? They jus postin' would you rather have it like 2 people ONLY on this thing? Cuz i know your callin me a new person on this board, I know iam one of them, so playa pleeze show some l0v3z.. Payce
 
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I have to give it the "JANKY" rating..
I mean
I like flows..FLOWZZZZ
not a bunch of complex and intriqit words throws in a sentence in an attemt to make a shred of sense..a flow has to have some sort of direction..and with the flow I don't even thing we got out the gate..
 
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@Twizz,I feel you maine,but see Deuce has Been under heavy Influence Of East Coast rap and I word thing's different cuzz.See you got niccas like you right ? Who like more flowy Type shit,That's not me,It never was,Unless I get deep thought from Lyrics It's pointless,I listen to music to learn and educate myself,Not to hear some fool rap about hoes and Money.Any feedbacc is good feedbacc though.

@Tim-C- You prolly the only cat on here that WILL relate to Lyircs I'll type Due to the fact your a east coast rap fan yourself and Listen to music for similar reasons As I do.Cuzz Deuce Influences Are Wu Tang and em' so it takes time to decipher shit,But it's all logic.

@Chrishogg-Where you been at maine ? lol....No text from you in aminute and all of a sudden Boo yoww you bacc in my circle.Stay up potna.

@Kodogg-Naw maine,It's just We been used to havin' OLDER people flow on the boards your 14 right ? All your homies from the 925 the same,Al youngstas,I mean I remeber we had our first siccness flows tournament and Every battle was unbelieable,One of the most creative ones ever was Me versus Tragic Losses,I still remember that one,And the fact that with these youngstas comes rhymes that appeal to younsgtas and the older member's on the board won't feel em' and in turn they'll dip on the board,Now were left with bullshit.Tim-c- and Biggz is Young too but they HAVE rappin' rights on this board and they established themselves,You can do the same just put effort in and not these 4 line bar's an' shit.


It's good to see y'all come out and participate on this thread I don't think any thread In A Minute has gotten this much of a variety of responses from mothafuccas.Good shit.


Deuce

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Naw I hear ya Duece n I appreciate u respondin in that way appreciatin feedback cus like u said any feedback is good feedback..you definately got potential cus you got good word play..but like i said..it needs direction..if you was speakin on a specific topic or incident or whatever...it would be 10x more heated ..at least thats how i feel
 
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Duece.. I'm feelin you.. But the thing is most ma shit (well yeah some of it) that i've posted is not pimpin on hoz.. I've posted a few lyke that and Im workin a real good one wit' meanin in shyt.. 'n i think y'all will feel it when Im done wit it ill be sure to post dat shyt up.. Anotha thing mayne.. Maybe you need to let go about the fact that olda' peepz still post here.. I havnt seen 1 post by stealth or anyone of those "OG"z.. :) Aight man jus ma 2 centz.. Payce.
 
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@Twizz,Right on with it,It is what it is potna,LOL@You callin' Me Out on the other thread you made bout intellectual rapper's.It's all good,I may hit that post with a response.


@kODOGG-Stealth passes through here very now and then loc,Just time is of shortage with These colllege goin' kid's like myself,It's a lot done a lot more to do kinda style,But uh....Anyway regardless of who's here or who isin't the standard's of the rap I look at day in day out is outrageous and I can't condone it.


Deuce

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@deuce.
i really don't post on here anymore (the whole site i mean.) i had a little flow on here a few days ago, don't know if you saw it. mainly the only lyrics i have posted in the past couple months have only been on the east co co board and the killa valley board. my stuff always got dogged here regardless of whether it was tight or not here, i seem to get good feedback on other forums though, so i can't call it. stay up and with the raps
 
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WUSS POPPIN HOMIE........NICE SPITS.......GOOD TO SEE YOU ON THIS BITCH GIVIN LESSONS.......YA KNOW.......KEEP THAT SHIT MASHIN.............IM STILL AROUND......BUT HALTED FOR NOW.......IMMA HOLLA THOUGH
 
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@Chrisdogg,With that being said cuzz,Why care what these ''handfull'' of faggot's say ? Most of these rooty poot rapper's are fag's in denial maine,Besides I saw that verse and It bench presses half the shit I read in here,Anyway cuzzin' regardless these niccas known to stray from chiccs cuzz....We call it homosexuality......Type a verse and I'LL rate that shit.


@Biggz...Issue em' with it loc...The beat...I forgot cuzz,Girlfriend occupies my time a day,Get at me on AIM with your address again...Sorry.


@Two faced....What up cuzzin' ? Daaaaaaam It's been a minute loc,Remember that accapella verse ? I d/Loaded it and It's on a Tape,Touch ground with D on Yahoo we need to chop it urgently familly.Got more cutting edge thought's to let loose on you potna.



Deuce

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Deuce said:
@Chrisdogg,With that being said cuzz,Why care what these ''handfull'' of faggot's say ? Most of these rooty poot rapper's are fag's in denial maine,Besides I saw that verse and It bench presses half the shit I read in here,Anyway cuzzin' regardless these niccas known to stray from chiccs cuzz....We call it homosexuality......Type a verse and I'LL rate that shit.
Deuce

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thanks for spittin the real on this subject of faggots on this forum. stay up