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x-kalibur

Sicc OG
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Aug 28, 2002
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Just a little somethin I wrote.. pz





(Hook)
Sometimes I get the tendacy to O.D slow-ly pour out some O.E.. I lost my one and only.. Lord if ya holy then ease the pain fo' me..


Sometimes I got that tendacy to O.D from all this depression, suicides a question.. Could cave my chest in, weapon of choice is the 357. wesson..
Don't even know why I'm stressin.. I'm guessin god ain't heard my crys for help n prayrs.. I'm in need of a blessin..
Nothin to live for.. All my hopes n' dreams out the door n' the lord is the one who holds the key.. On my own everything that happens seems to deprive me..
Can't see the reality of this life I lead.. Ease the pain with an eighth of weed, I feel the need to let my emotions flow..
Foe's lookin to put some bullets in my chest I guess its time to let go.. Don't even know.. Theres a fork in the road which path should I follow..
Could damn well be the end.. Although they hear the words and feel the hurt most people cant comprehend.. Bend the rules of fate..
To much hate to me to survive in this place.. Sometimes I wish I could erase my past.. At last my bad habits has caught up..
I'm doin my enemies and the world a favor.. Cause I've got the tendacy to pour that last cup..

(Hook)
Sometimes I get the tendacy to O.D slow-ly pour out some O.E.. I lost my one and only.. Lord if ya holy then ease the pain fo'
 
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Chaos

Sicc OG
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Sep 16, 2002
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Skarface....STFU mane ive seen your work, your shits horrible, X slaughtered you in the battle, that dont mean you gotta get all butt hurt and try to dis on shit, you know that shits coo so give him props dont hate...


X- that shit was sicc i liked it keep up the good work mane...
 
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K-oTiK

Member
#5
Oct 15, 2002
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fucc the dumb shit, if that was spit on wax, oh that will kill everything thats out right now, man don't wait, if your spittin flows like that, get on the mic and let the world feel that
 
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MrDontGIVEaFUCK

Sicc OG
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Apr 25, 2002
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I felt the hook.... it was clean and rhyme scheme was easily worded....

The verse... started off shit (lyrical) my old style..... good shit i liked it.... had some good lines.... middle of the verse was decent and the ending was juss hmm what words have i not used to rhyme... You could make a way better ending with the talent you got....


but overall a clean verse....


keep shit coming
 
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