David Lama vs. Tempa, Mad Skillz and vinceness_deala

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Oct 29, 2005
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heres a few recent quick battles I've had. just wondering what ya thought of them. give me some feed if you'd like.



David Lama vs. vinceness_deala


David Lama

F the funny shit. I came to abuse you
I’ll fuck Vince up worse than Stone Cold Steve Austin used to
he said he’d be a challenge, I’ll smack this dude
found out V ain’t just for Vendetta. but for whackness too
skill level?, I’m up a ahead by a bunch of degrees
cuz VD = Illness. only when referring to venereal disease
dead with the first line, you sure are frail, damn.
I wrapped this deal up quicker than a good car salesman
I got the punches, only downfolds been the fame
only straight line you ever had was the underscore in ya name

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vinceness_deala

David Lama, u don't want no drama/ Cuz I'll put your thoughts in a bag and send it mama/ But first imma read it and see how u thought u could fuck with me/ then Imma put you body under the street/ I'm living a life of crime/ I'm a rapist how i fuck up your rhymes/ then u gonna wanna battle again and i ain't got that time/ I'm done fuckin wit u, u know the rules/ u and me is like pootles and pit bulls. FUCK WIT IT




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David Lama vs. Tempa


David Lama

I got this. I don’t care what shorty say
cuz I’ll tear T apart. like Hulk Hogan in his glory days
he’s a glutton for pain. I’ll murder this slob
and get rid of temp quicker than dudes who find permanent jobs
my lines get oooooh’s. hence why Im eating u cats
tempo aint the reaction u get. its the pace I’m beating u at
fuck mind games. even you doubt ya better
people only say temp is good. when they talk bout the weather
we cant stand ya shit. its too whack for us to handle
you got people saying TBS. more than advertisers of the channel

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Tempa

I put the “heat” on this nigga, got em “sweatin” like a “sauna”…
My tounge is “deterioratin” cuz I spit mo “raw” than this “lama”…
My rhymes are “sharp” I’ll lyrically “slice” a nigga like-you…
If I gave you a “butchers knife” you couldn’t kill tha mic-dude…
Se get it right dude, or I’m gonna have to adjust-ya-thoughts…
You should learn from my verse, instead of takin it as just-a-loss…
Hoe’s give me more “service” than “T-mobile”, all you do is ride-dick…
You’re not in “front” of me wit your vocals, but you can be my “side-kick”…
Only 3 wins, no losses and you tryna step to a top-dog…
But its all good cuz you’ll get your first when this verse gets dropped-off.




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David Lama vs. Mad Skillz

David Lama

I feel bad for the parents that had this kid
cuz I’ll get rid of Mad quicker than Anger Management
I know you fear me, my verses be intense bro
so I gotta say MS is a bitch. isn’t that common sense though?
Pffff. you said my punches wouldn’t have you scarred?
I was about to be Mad. but then I remembered how bad u are
you wanted to go 18 lines?. na dude. you suck!
the gun’s woulda gotten banned. cuz a M18 is 18 too much
I’m old school. came to show what battles used to be of
and end Mad on a funny note. like the comic book usually does

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Mad Skillz

got it ~reloaded out the holsta~ aimed at this ~freepostin joka~
coz he only good at takin "sigs" like a ~freeloadin smoker~//-1

hold up, on some ~twisted shit~ we only smell "pussy" ~amidst this "dick"~
and i ain't makin breakfast but i'll putchya in "abyss quick"//-2

ya ~spits is listless~...more ass than ~thick bitches~
i think when he aint "usin paint", lamas prolly ~sniffin it~//-3

got em ~weak and soon kicked~, his verses is ~cheap and stupid~
treat him like abandoned cars...left in the street ~leakin fluids~//-4

u know that i ~hold that~ shit that'll make ya ~dome crack~
coz when i say i'm "rockin jersey" i aint meanin a ~throwback~//-5
~enuff of dis crap~ ...he aint a ~thug...kids wack~
cuz hell yea my "lines are ~above this cat
 
Apr 2, 2006
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Real Honest Criticism, if you can take it.

Yo man I think yo style is real generic. That whole wrestling simile you start all of your rhymes with is garbage. A lil kid can say what you say. In person, it may sound nice by the way you deliver it, idk. But you gotta be better than that online because all that niggaz see is lyrics.

Oh and I think that nigga Tempa touched you with that flow dawg. Idk if you wrote it down as a win but he got you