Also turn your shoulder and rotate your arms a little bit when you throw. Your fists straight up and down like a rock em sock em robot makes you look goofy as fuck.
After watching the video, I have to discount any of your threats to fly to Cali and knock someone out. Also disappointed that the track wasn't about your struggle to pay for McDonald's.
All joking aside, you're better than some of the rappers I've seen on here. Don't let that go to your head, most of them are a .12/10