Conte-Moving Target

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CcytzO_Loc

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EvilWayz said:
thanx folkz.......thatz all i ask......to tell yall the truth, since the photo was simple i wanted to make the text really stand out........the customer is really happy with it, but im not.......itz my name goin on it, dont want people to think i fell off or something

when i clicced on the link i did expect somethin way better from you e dub.....shit happens mayne....folks dont seem to be feelin the latest cover i did for Cuddie as much as the 1st cover i did last year but he was happy.....its kind of a fucced situation....i mean i got paid and the customer was happy but like you said....folks might think ya fell off or somethin....
 
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EvilWayz said:
yet another revision....thanx for all your commentz & feedback......keep it coming

That looks a little better (The picture and the Conte.)

But the Moving Target font and text effect looks awful. The target and the "motion" effect look really lame to be honest and should be changed to something more balanced with what does work (The Conte title with the picture and background) because right now it looks like it shouldn't be there IMO. I have the same opinion with the "Featuring The Industries Hottest Artists" font and text, it just doesn't work. It looks crunched together all on the bottom. I would say move the Conte design right up into the center to create the focus and then think up a new idea for a font and text effect for "Moving Target" and personally I would completely ditch the motion and the target design, keep the title (obviously) but change it's font and effect to something that actually works, I would also ditch the "Featuring All The Industries Hottest Artists", it's kind of useless I don't see the point of it being on the cover.

To top that off maybe work with a fancy border in either black or green or black and green continuing that same contrast and color you have on the Conte design.

Anyways hope that helps a bit.

Samos
 

EDJ

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THAT TARgET SCOPE COULD BE INBETWEEN "MOVINg" AND "TARgET" AND BE SYMMETRICAL. WHAT'S UP WITH THE DIRTY WHITE BAKgROUND? IS gRAFFITI ON A WHITE BUILDIN' WHAT HE(CLIENT) WANTED?
 
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The fourth one is dope I'd still just lose all the effects on "moving target" personally and just have it a solid color but I think that background goes with it nicely and the conte text is nice...
 
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yes the last version is dope, i was going to say that the other street backgrounds didnt fit with him lookin down. but the long tunnel background fits his looking down like he's lost or something. and the lightin comin from the top of the roof over his head fits perfectly. thats much better, good job man.