^^^Cmoke It Up^^^

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May 10, 2002
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they dont call me Cmoke for no reason//
walk in and expect me to Cmoke u up for free is worse than treason//
cuz ill lace it up so bad have ur lungs burnt out gotchu weazin//
stick wit tha herb stay away from the powders that gotchu sneezin//
afta u Cmoke my shit ull barley be breathin//
get lifted get that bitch and get that kid ull be concievin//
best be believin its puff puff pass on the grass my turn hit-me//
burn the green out Cmoke ya spleen out then take a hit off the grav-ity//
sad to see a sad-city get lifted priorities Strait twisted got shit listed//
1.visine
2.food
3.loot
4.swing for anotha hit n missed it//
its verball biology cracced out head game termonology dont u dare follow me im Cmoke leave the E n swallow me gotchu feelin good wishin u would takin a toke but u spent all ya money on tha pills thats gotchu broke//
honey blunt wraps that trap these fat stacks of green plants its constant//
Cmokin anything else is plain non-sense//


just sum quick shit

PeaCe
 
May 21, 2002
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#3
it was pretty cool but ur rhyme scheme was basic and if ur not gonna use rhymes within rhymes then use multisyllable words to pull ur verse together.keep at work dogg nobody is perfect i know im not.peece.
 
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ya ah realize too that that took like less than 2 mins...just a keystyle...im much more complex wit battles