EDJ said:
^ BUT YET AND STILL YOU DIDN'T OFFER N-E CONTRUCTIVE SUggESTIONS HE COULD DO TO IMPROVE HIS VIDEO, THE BEAT, THE FLOW, OR WHAT NOT.
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Come on Now EDJ i explained he need to put more money, time, and talent into his work if he wish to make it profitable. But i respect what you saying folks so I will take the time on here to elaborate on a few aspects of my previous statement to further help the quality of music that this man Is producing.
Also Y-Dr3sta i appreciate you not getting all dis respectful towards me for being critical of your work, to me that shows that you are confident in your abilitiy to make music and promote yourself which is a postive thing
So this is what ima do for ya'll, Ima break it down and be constructive as humanly possible, cause the truth of the matter is you may not know me and have no reason to respect my insight, but please belive that I do know what im talkin about and everything I say is 100% REAL shit
With that being said lets start with the quality of the video.
First off who ever edited the video musta been Based out or on hella Ex cause that flashing shit renders the video to the point of being nearly unwatchable.
The timing is way off on the sync of vocals to the mouth
If you gonna have footage of you in USA tire's at least show you sittin by a fuckin ride with rims on it, it dont even have to be yours, it can jus be parked on the streets in downtown sac outside the greyhound station but showin you in the rim shop and you with no ride is tacky to say the least.
Nekkid Bitches are real popular now a days, have a couple hos showin their titties in the video or eatin pussy, you have to offer the viewer incentive to watch the video, without shit like that the video becomes bland and easily forgetable.
Put somma tha Homiez in tha video, show the hood some love, not jus the local circle K also put Some footage of Heavy artillary, hella weed or money or even a half gallon of Henny all captures the eye and helps to keep the viewers attention, these are all good additional things you can put in the video so people can identify with the image you are attempting to portray.
ok that just about does it for the video
now for the Flow, folks it is my opinion that your flow is unimaginative, the lyrical content is redundant and the opposite of flamboyant. There are no "lyrical acrobatics" It sounds like your talking basically You rap with very little energy/emotion, i feel like your words are comming from a peice of paper when they should be comming from the heart and soul.
And that brings us to the beat/production
I dont know if it was you or your folks that composed that beat, but that beat was very bland and uneventful. You need something with a little more force and gangsta appeal to go with your new flow which hopefully you will begin to craft after you read this. Correct me if im wrong but i heard a few stock triton sounds in that beat, so if you do have access to equiment of that magnitude Id suggest experimenting with different sounds and Really putting your all into your production cause when i hear beats like that it sounds to me like your settleing, like th beat sounds "good enough" when it should sound like the hardest shit ever made.
Man there you have it. EDJ bet you didnt think I was Really gonna come back and lace the lil muthafuckas tennis shoes up huh? LOL
And I in no way was sayin Lynch and luni and smigg where my favorite artists, i was just saying thats the level that he needs to elevate his game up to if he hopes to compete in the marketplace.
The bottom line though Y Dr3sta is what you said this is a side hustle and you aint take it too serious, And that is showing as bright as a neon light with your material here. I'm jus saying when you ready to take it to the next level and treat music as a full time occupation there^^^ are a few things for you to take into consideration.
I keep it REAL and hopefully this helps somebody in the game acheive success.
Thank you for your time
sincerely,
tha Muthafuckin REALEST
