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tosin

tosin

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the one piece of advice id like to give you is that the font is too small of a type...i was doing my gma's funeral program and all my mom kept telling me is that 'old folks is gonna be reading this' ...

i think you should make it larger cuz most restaurants are in low light...
 
underground

underground

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Apr 9, 2005
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tosin said:
the one piece of advice id like to give you is that the font is too small of a type...i was doing my gma's funeral program and all my mom kept telling me is that 'old folks is gonna be reading this' ...

i think you should make it larger cuz most restaurants are in low light...
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good call... this ones already gone to print though and I can tell you it looks fine at full size. what's posted here is only about 1/2 it's actual size. thanks for the feedback yall keep it comin
 
FANATIKAL

FANATIKAL

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Jan 10, 2003
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...i think the picture on the front is too boring... like it was just taped on.. it needs a fancy border of some sort, maybe the same effect you used around the edge of the white part
 
E.MAN

E.MAN

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A few things that bother me. First off this is a good design, and overall it works, but in my opinion there's a few things that could of been done better.

a. Text. None of the fonts used really stand out. If you look at any restaurant menu, the fonts used and colors stand out and work with the overall theme of the restaurant. The font sizes, colors, and layout are all the same and nothing differentiates between price or dish or info.

b. Logo. This kind of goes with the font problem. When I looked at it I automatically thought "Hey, it's a script font and a sans serif font." It's very bland and doesn't really show case what is should "Class." It's no different than what someone could of created in Word.

Again, overall it works, but as a designer I don't think it showcases the "Class" it should for such a 'classy' restaurant.
 
underground

underground

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E.MAN said:
A few things that bother me. First off this is a good design, and overall it works, but in my opinion there's a few things that could of been done better.

a. Text. None of the fonts used really stand out. If you look at any restaurant menu, the fonts used and colors stand out and work with the overall theme of the restaurant. The font sizes, colors, and layout are all the same and nothing differentiates between price or dish or info.

b. Logo. This kind of goes with the font problem. When I looked at it I automatically thought "Hey, it's a script font and a sans serif font." It's very bland and doesn't really show case what is should "Class." It's no different than what someone could of created in Word.

Again, overall it works, but as a designer I don't think it showcases the "Class" it should for such a 'classy' restaurant.
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thanks for the feedback. unfortunately i didn't have any control over the logo.
 
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