CHIZZLE! The Tourny..Round 1: hblock1 vs. LEE-ZILLA 69
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~ if Lee's fly.. why is that I envision a pidgeon../ think u movin up in Siccness? betta lower ya seat from its lifted position../ larger than life is exactly where ya sisters tongue wrapped../ Lee a netbanga.. all he needs is tha shift key to bust caps../ plus.. i kan freestyle to tha sound of ya hearse reversin../ meanwhile u struggle for good lines like Cassius Clay writin words in cursive../ and u kouldnt catch a flow ridin seventeen oceans../ yea.. u won plenty battles but most of them seem bogus../ like submarine radars.. tha red'll spot ur house../ fuck tha knocks and shouts kuhz tha burner turn ya white T to a polka dotted blouse../ see.. i'd support ya crack habits.. but im low on my funds../ Lee's tha type to get pistol whipped while he's holdin tha gun../ i spit bars so cold it left Hades froze../ how u gonna step to greatness wit dat 1980's flow?../ only thing kickin from then was adidas shell toes../ yet u stuck to ya pussy rhymes like ya pubes is velcro..!! ~
i been to utha websites where they say two lines is a bar.. den hit anutha one and they say one line is a bar!! i did mine accordin to one line is a bar!! if its tha utha way wit u guys.. let me knoe and i'll add more bars!! if its tha way i did it.. den koo.. Lee.. u up!!
~ if Lee's fly.. why is that I envision a pidgeon../ think u movin up in Siccness? betta lower ya seat from its lifted position../ larger than life is exactly where ya sisters tongue wrapped../ Lee a netbanga.. all he needs is tha shift key to bust caps../ plus.. i kan freestyle to tha sound of ya hearse reversin../ meanwhile u struggle for good lines like Cassius Clay writin words in cursive../ and u kouldnt catch a flow ridin seventeen oceans../ yea.. u won plenty battles but most of them seem bogus../ like submarine radars.. tha red'll spot ur house../ fuck tha knocks and shouts kuhz tha burner turn ya white T to a polka dotted blouse../ see.. i'd support ya crack habits.. but im low on my funds../ Lee's tha type to get pistol whipped while he's holdin tha gun../ i spit bars so cold it left Hades froze../ how u gonna step to greatness wit dat 1980's flow?../ only thing kickin from then was adidas shell toes../ yet u stuck to ya pussy rhymes like ya pubes is velcro..!! ~
i been to utha websites where they say two lines is a bar.. den hit anutha one and they say one line is a bar!! i did mine accordin to one line is a bar!! if its tha utha way wit u guys.. let me knoe and i'll add more bars!! if its tha way i did it.. den koo.. Lee.. u up!!
^you had some dope lines in there....but ALOT of simple ish in there too....id suggest just studying ALL YOUR FAVORITE RAPPERS and that'll help you get a feel for how to write better...feel me?...just improve on ya punches and multis to start...add nameplay on lee...you could use that verse for anyone the way it is now...im not tryin to bring you down...only help you elevate....take it for what it is and do so cuzzin...much respect for not no-showin doe..props.
TSSSSSSSSSSS HAAAAAAA IT WILL BE A GRAND TOURNY MY SON MORE GRAND THEN TANS TOURNY IN ENTER THE DRAGON
YOU SEE FROM THE LAST 2 TOURNIES WE KNOW WHO ALL THE NO SHOWS ARE SO THIS AINT GONNA BE SOME 16 MAN TOURNY IT WILL BE 8 CHALLENGERS OF MY CHOOSING AND THE WINNER WILL GET A SHOT AT THE GRANDMASTER YOURS TRULY, AND I AINT GONNA BE HELLA STRICKT THERE IS GONNA BE MORE TIME TO POST UP A VERSE
YOU SEE FROM THE LAST 2 TOURNIES WE KNOW WHO ALL THE NO SHOWS ARE SO THIS AINT GONNA BE SOME 16 MAN TOURNY IT WILL BE 8 CHALLENGERS OF MY CHOOSING AND THE WINNER WILL GET A SHOT AT THE GRANDMASTER YOURS TRULY, AND I AINT GONNA BE HELLA STRICKT THERE IS GONNA BE MORE TIME TO POST UP A VERSE