check my freestyle tell me wat ya think

[carlos]

forgiveness isn't possbile, burn that fuckas house down
playin da wrong person dat made me turn dat fucka into a clown
didn't no it could be like that, it'z crazy so i put my trust in a gat
shakin da whole family up when his Head went splat
gangsta wit it cuz i showem what i'm about fucka get cho ass to da ground
apology accepted, i'm still cuttin u in pieces to whea ya body wont be found
stealin money from u cuz u aint serious, Funny is what u lookin like
dead serious when countin high wit da pipe, get money til i die
lookin fly in da club ya ho wanna be wit me so find someone else
fucked her wit a passion dat make u grab a gun so u can kill yo self
pimpz is who i hang wit and gettin phat bricks cuz we slangin
do gangsta shit if sumone mess wit me, my guns'll let u kno im armed and dangerous

 

[Cante-up]

IMO-average shit,not very original or personnal.

 

[carlos]

yea ur right it looks average i coulda done betta wit it tho....i'll come up wit another one, thanks for ya opinion

 

[40ozThugsta]

I like that shit.. it's violent and graphic...
some sicc shit.. i like killa shit.. and suicidal shit..
anything talkin bout death and darkness. or violence im diggin!!!

so good job on this freestyle.. you sound record it in audio over a beat

 

[visions]

that shit was pretty basic but it was ok peace
vision