Can some1

[RobertoxYLx]

Gimme feedback please.. Its complete and just tryna see what others think of it.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ER99ExWMlp8&feature=related

 

[SMOKIELOCS]

THE TRACK WASNT BAD BUT YOU GOTTA WORK ON YOUR DELIVARY BRO.PRACTICE HELPS....

 

[RobertoxYLx]

Since this is the East Co Co Forum i thaught itd be nice to share this.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x7mCHDh8mlw&feature=feedu

 

[Sacsick]

its sounds unprofessional like you got a cheap mic
just saying anything else not my job

 

[SMILEY LOCZTERO]

i made my attempt on the hook..and last verse,the beat slapped..so no one was feeling the track? how did the hook sound i aint that good at em but im working at it..