Can I get some feedback Siccness?

[autistic]

I know yall prolly bout to go 18 dummy on me but fuck it. What yall think of the second song on my myspace? It's called This is my Shit but on my page it just says Gemimac ft. Tellymac. If you want you can give me feedback on all my songs on the page but that's the one I want feedback on the most.

www.myspace.com/gemimac

Whatever your feedback is I appreciate it even if it's all good or all bad.

Thanks

 

[Jake]

hard for me to give feedback on a song that doesnt even have original production

but the second verse has NO flow to it...its everywhere,not riding the beat one bit

 

[autistic]

Thanks for checking the song out Jake.
If I could get some feedback on this other song of mine it's called Tonight I'd appreciate it. You can find it on my soundclick. Just go to soundclick and do a search for Gemimac. I rapped over Pac's If I Die Tonight from Me Against the World.
Thanks to whoever got time to check it out.

 

[autistic]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=343969

ok so just click that link and check out the song tonight.
It's the 3rd song on the page. Let me know what yall think.

 

[scrillafein]

supp mayne. i personally ain't feeling that shit. that beat is whack, sounds like some east coast shit.

 

[autistic]

Thanks for checking it out. That's a Tupac beat.

 

[Reegz]

Tonight is stoopid. You bussin cuzzo.

 

[scrillafein]

Thanks for checking it out. That's a Tupac beat.

for real? i bet they made that beat after 2pac died and slapped it with one of his verses......i don't think 2pac would've fucked with that beat and if he did, i still ain't feelin' it. u should produce some beats and spit and then give it a try.

 

[autistic]

Tonight is stoopid. You bussin cuzzo.

Thanks Cousin. Yeah I think Tonight is sick too. Im just trying to see what these other cats think.

 

[tecman]

shit str8. yo tell me sumthin how did you get myspace to let you put up a instrumental by someone else. i keep tryin but keep gettin the copyright memo.

 

[autistic]

Thanks tecman. I just put that shit up. I've had those songs up a while though. Maybe when I put up new ones it could be more complicated.

 

[tecman]

aight. man cuz i was tryin to put some mixtape type shit up and got shut down. maybe i'll try again. yo hit us up at www.myspace.com/pimpinmobbinentertainment tell me what cha think.

 

[autistic]

fasho ill hit you with feedback tomorrow. Im about to leave work real soon.

 

[tecman]

aight