Broken Heart Blues

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Mar 26, 2005
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this is the words of a man who's heart's been repeatedly broken and mended, broken and mended, the mental anguish of it all..............

the challenges and injustice i face in every day life~includes/
when guy fights~insue and future wife~issues/
more than wipes~tissues, wrist to knife~in~too/
like a kite~in~two, it's my life~it's~crude/
been through~more~than, due~mortage, its too~morbid/
mom and dad dont like me? i wish them through~carnage/
its too~far~bitch, to go through~garbage/
this aint the new~partridge, this far from a cool~harvest/
you dont wanna speak~up, it'll get you cheeks~dumped/
right next to that tree~stump, on a street~lump, kick you along with a knee~punt/
treat this like a man~ran~band, cant adjust quick like a second~tight~pivot/
now you waiting for an afgan~man in a yellow, checker~striped~civic/
i would happily feed~you, not even when i need~to/
your always in my heart, everytime it's broken open, i bleed~you/
so twat~do, make a decision in mach~two/
whether to keep that twat~cool, or let another pop~you/



man and thats from the heart, that wasn't even my quality, i just had to get my feelings out before i blew up.......
 
Apr 8, 2005
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good shit, heart felt stuff is best left simple in my opinion though, when it comes to emotions tell it straight foward instead of tryin to throw complexity in to it,but you gotta do you, either way, its tight, so keep doin yur thang