Breath Control DVD Cover

[MCKadafi]

Whats good? Im working on the cover of my DVD right now called BREATH CONTROL - LIFE OF AN MC GRINDIN' FOR AIR. Well I'm lost, I don't know but something is missing in the cover, what do you think and what is missing? I think I have t put something next to the Double Dose Sticker, but I don't know what and I tryed a million things, anybody got any ideas?

BTW: The picture lines at them buttom are the same right now, in the final version it won't be the same, its just to show how it looks right now.

Thanks for your help.

 

[Sven]

It's propably because of the kinda boring background picture. It's tto dark and there are no contrasts in it so it's "just a backgound picture" but it dosn't grap ones attention.

Good lookin the trailer is dope!

 

[tosin]

i dont really see what a building has to do w/ mcs grinding in the industry...

the rest of the shit is nice...i like the flag as the sky...

 

[MCKadafi]

What I was thinking with that building is that most of the MCs we got on the DVD really still on there block and thats where it come from, and with that american flag in the sky its like beeing an MC is the american dream for the kids from the projects. Thats the concept I was trying to build with the cover, but yeah ... I'm trying some different stuff ... any ideas?

Btw: Everybody that is intressted in watching the trailer can do it right here http://www.rawdawgz.net/breathcontrol.rmvb (you need Real Player to view it)

Good looking @ Sven and Tosin

 

[tosin]

i was thinking the idea was bout the projects...maybe have a diff pic of cats freestyling in a cypher in the courtyard of the projects...that would be a better visual IMO for the theme you are trying to convey...

cuz really that building doesnt look like project to me...it looks like an office building in the warehouse district...

 

[M7 Creations]

its simple..spice it up, add colour...rather than one plain pic...blend couple...

 

[SLOWPOKE]

GOOD,....LIL PLAIN,....BUT GOOD

 

[D-Skrilla]

It's coo.

 

[MCKadafi]

This is a new version, what y'all think about this one?

 

[ESFCE]

thats way better...stick with that

 

[Sven]

YEah thats way better. Just a little something. U should put the group of rappers in the center.

 

[tosin]

it fills the space...but the angle and the proportions are a tad bit off...but it does look better...