brainwashed (change all that)

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Apr 8, 2005
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you guys remmember this shit ovarbmuposted awhile ago, only had two verses, well i hit him up, i wrote the last verse, and he revised his a lil bit, so tell me what yall think

ovarbmu
no respect.. you wanna change all that
only one not speakin on the range all black
bling, rings and things, the real world aint that
but im here to say the realness has just came back
it's all hate... you wanna change all that
but the game's mind frame is to slain all rap
we should rush the studio and let it all hang out
from the bay to the east, north and dirty dirty south
they hold you back... you wanna change all that
how the fuck can you advance with the same old crap
i ain't seen another pac since the days he was strapped
now niggas will talk caps, but couldnt even load a gat
they fuckin' brainwashed.. you wanna change all that
but the pain brings the rain on it's way fall back
let the melody release you, no one to say peace to
help change the industry or they might never see you


ovarbmu
the game is soft man... you wanna change all that
niggas hanging feather boas with the pimp game hat
but the simp wimp cats addicted to playing the role
of a real thug standing idle with his veins all cold
they make you sick..you wanna change all that
pushin mixtapes till your shit ain't all that
or at least they got you thinkin' that you ain't all that
there's a drought but i came to get the game all wet
they don't know talent...you wanna change all that
straight turnin' away cats if they ain't all black
not even gonna listen man they ain't all wack
if they are black then they gotta be rough like new jack
fuck the industry...i don't wanna change all that
blue collar muthafuckas wanna change format
you aint gonna change the way that i speak on cats
if my cd leak, ill still peak on the map

thatguy
everybodys a bitch, you wanna change all that, straight real so you never seein a platinum plaque, these industry cats, talkin bout they blazin ass tracks, but not a damn thing they speakin of is based upon fact, its sad but its true, you wanna change all that, you wanna see some rappers make it that aint all black, but you dont wanna act like a fag, then go and dye yur hair blonde, or make a half a dozen tracks all about killin yur mom, its all bad, you wanna change all that, you tryin to get in the game you wanna make an impact, but instead fake bitchs on tv wearin nice coats, riden eachothers shit so much, they rappin with cum in their throats, talents where they lack, you wanna change all that, but the industry wont respect you if yur not a hood cat, so you want yur album played? go get shot nine times, and learn to ruin dres beats with some fake ass rhymes.

thanks in advance for the responces
 
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thanx for your posotive comments, as soon as i get the homie to make a beat yur wish will be granted, ive only done audio once before, i usually just write, so no promises on how tight my verse will come out, get at me on pm if ya wanna hear what i sound like on the mic
 
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I didn't see the original thread, so reviewing as seen. The first verse was dope, second was alright, and third the same. It don't seem like the content of the new one fits with the old ones though.
 
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thats cool, thanx for being honest, i wanted to touch on the genral topic (how fake the industry is) but express it with my own style, if i made the content fit exactly, there would be no point in calling the verse mine cause i would be copying his style, thankyou for the feedback though, much appriciated.
 
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dammmm man that shit is tight!!!
im feelin what you saying in this song.... cause it's all true....
you should record this in audio.. Id wanna hear it.....

BUt yeaaah like the lil Eminem and 50 cent disses in there!
hahaha tight shit...
 
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thanx homie, yur opinion is much appriciated

whenever i get my homie to make a beat, me and ovarbmu are gonna record this,and what i said to kodogg goes to you too, hit me up if you wanna hear what i sound like on the mic
 

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Shits Dope Real RAP:

Plottin on ways to get paid/ while they stratigize new ways for us to get raped/
the pace is quick/ you have no room to slip/ these are the new age cotton fields, where you beat with no whip/ if, i had on choice to do life over, i wouldnt change a thing/ but maybe bring more heat to the flame/ incinerate the game single handedly/ and when these mothafuckas abandon me, reality sinks in quick/ this makes my skin thick/ so when bricks hit, they bounce off of my shit/ and i can lift the worlds weight off my shoulders/ instead of stones theyre throwin boulders/ doin wrong, but wanna tell us where we belong/ with no guidence for themselves/ i hear church bells lets run to the cathedral/ but even then we cant escape all this evil/ you people will lay in fetal positons, wishing this mission will cease, puttin chips in your hands and 4 heads it the mark of the beast/ streets and peace thats really no hope/ they made it crazy and supplied us with dope/ cut another mans throat but hes strugglin just like you....theres no time to relax the next victam just might be you/ so stay on alert like homeland and terror/ this is the most paranoid error in world history////and what those politicians do behind closed doors that the real unsolved mystories..............