brainwashed (change all that) my verse

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thatguy

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i just did this to get an idea on how ima spit it and how it'd sound, i aint spittin first, i just did this this way cause its easier, prolly not even gonna use that lil intro i gave it, but here ya go, the good the bad, and the somewhere in between, i dont care, i wanna hear all yur feed on this, so wus really good?


http://s25.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1EKRVGMDJC89A2V7QEOGM44SZC



again sorry bout the quality, i might have my homie clean it up a bit, cause i aint good at editing at all, so , it is what it is, all feedbacks appriciated
 
ovarbmu

ovarbmu

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ahhhhhhhhhhh, my creations coming to life dog. that shit was ruff but all that was really ruff about it was your voice is to low. when we do the chorus, ill do it then send it to you and you can overlap your voice on it so its sounds like we both did it at the same time.
 
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thatguy

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ahhh thats how you wanna do it, aight, by the way, who has what verse, were you gonna take my suggestion and let me spit in the middle? cause that line you have that says "help change the industry or they may never see you" that sounds like a conclusion to me, like its supposed to be the final words of the song ya feel me? anyways, get back to me on this, cause i meen, its yur track
 
ovarbmu

ovarbmu

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1. okay we can arrange it anyway, cause your gonna have to do the mixing, ill send you my verses in acapella sometime before sunday night.

2. your flow/delivery was ok, just make sure its smooth and stuff and like every good writer, REVISE YOUR LYRICS, because some of your stuff could be tightened up. lets aim to have this all done with and recorded by monday night at the latest, so that means rewrite/revise your work and be ready to have it all done(with my verses) by monday night.
 
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thatguy

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haha, thats fuckin sick dogg, u a go getter just like me, wantin shit done all quick like, anyways, it does no good to tell me that theres shit i can tighten up, without tellin me what, ya feel me? so wherever u think there is a spot i could tighten up tell me, ill work on it
 
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