Just a quick freestyle...how can I improve yall?!
My tongue twisters givin you brain blisters/
spinnin ya cranium- ain't no hope for resistors/
sisters fuckin their misters despite negligance/
can't fight my intelligence or wrong the rights of my lyrical elligance/
chargin harder than a herd of elephants- got you runnin at the speed of sound/
dumb-found as you bolt it homewards bound/
you stop to turn around and I beat you to the ground/
wrists bound like cuffs- my sounds hittin harder than the Ruffz/
callin all ya bluffs and usin ya insides as chicken stuffs/
stricken enough to thicken my tough- I personify power/
sickened as I devour ya in a lead-filled shower/
while you just cower under the roof of a crumblin tower/
sumblin as my power makes it collapse/
a lapse in ya raps causes the occurance of serious mis-haps/
traps bringin you to fate/
singin about how this is the beginnin of somethin great/
it is: ya dyin date- coz I'm so high you can never relate/
I push you aside and make you segregate/
my trait is that of a ruler- Pharoah style- scribin like a schooler/
a baller- ballin as my foes fall like a fooler/
you're a drooler- droolin coz of my lyrics superb/
heard on every corner and curb of the 'burb/
word is my breath is so powerful it dictates life and death/
fates and destinies predicted by my lyrical disease/
causin cancer and un-ease whilst you're benine/
you freeze when you here these "frees'" like they're a nine/
I breeze these lyrical seas like leaves in the eve's trees/
believe these leads like a miracle someone sees/
apparations and visions predicted durin verbal collisions/
precisions precise coz of decisions thought over cleverly twice/
nice, yet burnin like spice/
gettin you supersticious- spittin viscious yet delicious/
malicious- so legendary some think I'm fictitious/
like Jesus- but I'm precious, on a verbal journey/
can't no-one burn me, only learn from me or face my attorney/
spittin crazy like AZ, pickin off verses like the petals of a daisy/
ain't gonna phase me, only raise me/
got you "sleepin" like you're lazy- you wake up and it's bright white and hazy/
My tongue twisters givin you brain blisters/
spinnin ya cranium- ain't no hope for resistors/
sisters fuckin their misters despite negligance/
can't fight my intelligence or wrong the rights of my lyrical elligance/
chargin harder than a herd of elephants- got you runnin at the speed of sound/
dumb-found as you bolt it homewards bound/
you stop to turn around and I beat you to the ground/
wrists bound like cuffs- my sounds hittin harder than the Ruffz/
callin all ya bluffs and usin ya insides as chicken stuffs/
stricken enough to thicken my tough- I personify power/
sickened as I devour ya in a lead-filled shower/
while you just cower under the roof of a crumblin tower/
sumblin as my power makes it collapse/
a lapse in ya raps causes the occurance of serious mis-haps/
traps bringin you to fate/
singin about how this is the beginnin of somethin great/
it is: ya dyin date- coz I'm so high you can never relate/
I push you aside and make you segregate/
my trait is that of a ruler- Pharoah style- scribin like a schooler/
a baller- ballin as my foes fall like a fooler/
you're a drooler- droolin coz of my lyrics superb/
heard on every corner and curb of the 'burb/
word is my breath is so powerful it dictates life and death/
fates and destinies predicted by my lyrical disease/
causin cancer and un-ease whilst you're benine/
you freeze when you here these "frees'" like they're a nine/
I breeze these lyrical seas like leaves in the eve's trees/
believe these leads like a miracle someone sees/
apparations and visions predicted durin verbal collisions/
precisions precise coz of decisions thought over cleverly twice/
nice, yet burnin like spice/
gettin you supersticious- spittin viscious yet delicious/
malicious- so legendary some think I'm fictitious/
like Jesus- but I'm precious, on a verbal journey/
can't no-one burn me, only learn from me or face my attorney/
spittin crazy like AZ, pickin off verses like the petals of a daisy/
ain't gonna phase me, only raise me/
got you "sleepin" like you're lazy- you wake up and it's bright white and hazy/
